Awh! That was really cute. I loved the ending, I thought it was perfect. They both found a way to be happy! And he's coming to live next to her. Great ending! I'm sad it's over now, though. :(
Wow only one more chapter?! I'm excited to see how this ends! I thought the last part of this chapter was very cute. It's so obvious they both care too much about each other to just let go. :D
Awh poor Madison, and Jake! That must be really hard. I hope everything works out someway, but I just can't see a way, unless they decide to do the long distance thing.
'Even if she had to wait until the stars shined bright above, she would wait and listen to the waves crash together.'
Wow. That was really cute, the last part when he kissed her. I dont know what's going to happen now. I hope they end up together though. I think they're meant to be, but Jake did have a point when he mentioned Madison would be leaving for College anyway. Well, as always excited for the next update!
Oh my god, this is ending soon?! Noo! I don't want it to end. Its too great! :(
This update was fantastic! I can't believe Jake might be leaving, and for a year! Maybe Madison can go with him? :D I can't wait to see what happens now, the wait is gonna kill me. I seriously don't understand why more people haven't commented this!
Awh! I loved this. It was just perfect enough, I liked how it showed a little piece of how Madison and Jake act together now. I'm excited to see if they start dating, I hope so! Great update as always. :)
Ohh! I loved the update! Things are getting good with Jake and Madison! I can't wait to see what happens next. Poor Jake, though. I think it's really cute how much he likes her. :D
This is great so far! I already love Jake a lot. :) It kinda reminds me of the series 'Summer Boys', the whole concept of the beach and everything. I can't wait for the next update, subscribed!
Hey there, I think this story has great potential. Actually, I think your writing does - I'm just wondering about the story, I really do like it now but the ending seems a little predictable... so I'm kind of hoping you'll throw in a twist? Anyways, I really like the two chapters you've posted so far, and I'll be eagerly awaiting more :D