The Fifth World - Comments

Can Bo use her powers to help them? Pretty pretty please?

oh, nooo! i don't want them to die! you can't let them die! somebody needs to save them!
update soon!

I feel like a jerk, I know, not all stories are for everyone. I'm on your third chapter, and though I want to like it, it seems like it has potential...I just...its boring me. I'm sorry to say, but your character, she went from innocence to mavelence, a character isn't supposed to change attitudes like that, hurting people no matter what they did is wrong, and I hope you and the characters know that lesson. I'm just really dissapointed with the sudden leap from info, all this creative worlds to...a crappy cliche. I'm going to keep reading, and...hopefully I can put up a better comment. (please don't take this personally, I am commenting on the story, not your writing, and not you as a person. Please don't take offense...but take my advice...:)

They all have a lot to learn when it comes to interacting with each other. They'll need those skills to survive.

Well considering he didn't try to kill her, I'm sure that it isn't ALL COMPLETELY bad.

wow, i didn't even realize that he touched felicity's hand until you said it.. I wanna know what he saw, so.. update soon!!

omg! Cyrric touched Felicity! Now he knows about her past, right?

GO FELICITY! I think she is officially my favorite character.. Even if she does end up betraying them...

i hope no one dies. that would be so tragic.

Now I get whats going on...
People destroy what scares them.

i <3 this story, your an amazing writer :) cant wait to see what happens next.

suspense kills me.

So they're on the run for some un-known reason huh..?

oh my. I'm scared for Cyric and Bo. What was that guy's ability?

ohh no! what's gonna happen? I hope cynric will be alright!
update soon!

completely agree with Leap of Faith. But then who knows... The prejudice against her may actually be the drive of her hatred that leads towards the stereotype of a thorne path. Or she might come to terms with it and go a different way...
I loved the cliff-hanger in the end of the chapter btw.

Felicity seems to be just a little misunderstood.

well... I hope that the thorne turns out to be ok after all... Bo'll need all the help, friends and support she can get.

another cliffhanger!

Love it :)