This story seriously deserves more comments than it has. And I really want to know what happened with her dad and how her relationship with Ashford will develop.
And...I don't know exactly how old Ashford is supposed to be, but I kind of imagine him like this: http://mathematicsbydesign.net/images/male_math_teacher_doing_order_of_operations_splp.jpg
I read mostly slash, but this fiction caught my attention with its style and the female character. She is so interesting. I will stick to this and read more ;]
Wow...Just wow. Your writing style is an inspiration and the story is just amazing. I really can't wait to see what the next chapters bring into this whole situation. :3 Subscribe and please update?
OMG! :O Why did she pass out??? Wait... I'm going to guess... Is it because she is starting to feel emotions again? And I think Ashford has been obsessing over what to do about her, and her grades...? maybe? Or is he just obsessing about her? :) Love how you've been posting so quickly!♥ ♥Michelle
yay!!! I was sooo excited to see you wrote more!! I think it is her dad's and her legs from under the tree. And I like Ashford :) he is an amazing character and I can't wait to see what he's going to do with the picture.
Everytime I read this story, I'm totally sucked in this world you've created. I love to find out more about the characters, it gives me a better feeling how he/she "works".