A Depraved Caress - Comments

this is amazingly well written (:

I really missed reading this story.
All these feelings you bring into it...I love it.
Your descriptions of...everything are amazing - they are amazingly beautiful.
Especially this chapter.
It was painfuland sad, but...it really showed your genuine talent.
I really liked it because it also showed me more of Maines life, her situation.
She lives a horrible life...

I'm really eager to read more.

awesome

I'm in love with this story.
Really, I am. It's amazing.
YOU are amazing because you have this wonderful writing skills.
This story makes me want to read more.
I'm egaer to find out how/when Maine (I adore that name btw) will open up to Mr. Kenmore.
She's a real interesting character and I'm always curious to what she will do next.

I really like this!!!

I love it and I love the layout! <3

Gracias mucho mad as a hatter :) I blame it on the brain farts.
starr8nn, is that a bad 'wow'? D; paranoia sucks.

wow ;o

Um, yeah. This is fabulous.
The only problem I see with the actual physical text is that you keep putting [i/]. It's actually.

WTF, don't say you suck! this is amazing! (and i love how the name of the school sounds like Jansport. Was there point intended in that?) >.< I'm off the the second chapter.

<3<3..this is very originalk i love how this is going!!

I really like how this story is turning out so far :) Can't wait for more!

<3Michelle

really liking it cant wait till you update!

woohoo! first comment!!! i really like how it started out as the one chicks point of view. very interesting!! update soon??

</3 Tears of sorrow