I'm only on Ch. 4, but this is amazing. I love the way both you of you ladies write... Reminds me of how my friends and I used to write, haha. As long as you love what you're writing about, someone will always want to keep reading it... Keep doing what you're doing! =)
^^^ I hadn't noticed the "everything we had" until you pointed it out, but "demons in our past" is def striking a "Pour Yourself A Drink" reference when I read over it again. (:
It suddenly occurs to me that I could lose- everything we had may stay in the history of our lives, like demons living in our pasts instead of sweet memories to kiss us goodnight that reminded me of not one but TWO songs, Everything We Had-The Academy Is…, and Snakes On A Plane- Cobra Starship (Bill's part, "So kiss me goodbye (goodnight), honey I'm gonna make it out alive. So kiss me goobye (goodnight), I can see the devil (demons) in you're eyes."
You don't suck. It's actually quite fantastic, and completely worth the wait =] Thanks for updating. I'm curious to see what Gabe has to say... or do =p <3 Manda
I love the new update! I'm pretty happy William choose Michael :) I feel a little bad for Gabe but he's also fucking crazy SIDE NOTE: At the beginning of this story I thought Gabe was saying like "queerdo" like... queer.. yeahh I finally looked it up haha xD I didn't get why he always said it in tender moments I was like, that's rude. Anyway, please update again soon!