I was eating breakfast when I read 11, and I nearly spat it OUT when I saw "William smiled,". YOU MAKE ME SICK. Well, nearly. I do love the romance that has returned :) Tis good. Love it. xxx
that. was. insane. I am SO JEALOUS of your writing skills!!! GRRR! But I absolutely loved it :D Love AND Lemons in one chapter... i'm feeling very lucky today :D xxxxxxxxx
This chapter was perfect. Obviously it wasn't happy, that's not what I meant in the least. But it was so legitimate and believable, I would've expected the characters to react the same way if they were real people. Kudos for you =] Thanks for the update. <3 Manda
Stupid Brendon. You killed your dad, it sucks, but for God's sakes, Ryan didn't do SHIT and he's suffering. Just so you know, you made Brendon a total bastard in this story =p I know, product of the environment and whatnot.... But it doesn't change that he's a douchebag. lol But thanks for the update, haha. <3 Manda
Omg Vegemite! lol that one made me smile. Love you both for the updates. I'm liking where this one is going and I love that Michael is now a part of it.
That was a beautiful update. The way you spin your words tugs at my heart and I feel what your characters feel. Thanks for that. I can't wait for more.