ok as much as i disliked the fact that frank has left i really liked this chapter. i lol'd when gerard said 'ok, i want bob back' i felt kinda sorry for him, i can just imagine ray's disappointed face and it would be painful. naww bob and mikey, too cute for words. *huggles*
I don't remember if I commented on the last chapter. But I just read it again, and i must say.... it made my pants happy. : D
And this chapter... I was screeeaaming "NOOOOO" inside my head (because its late, and I'm supposed to be sleeping)! Damn no, he can't leave. Me is sad : (
Me + this story = Love! I love it, it's writen really well and yeah, is just a great story! But omg, that better not be the end of them! GERARD BETTER FOLLOW FRANK!
you already know my suggestions for the next chapter, and i've already hit you for making frank leave, but i'll voice it again virtually: you CANT make him leave, you HAVE to make gerard follow him or you could make szabo follow him but you cant make him LEAVE!!!! *runs away and cries*
wow, i'm utterly speechless at that small update...i love the honesty of it, the bitterness as well...the wife knows she's got gerard in the palm of her hands and that he's too wrapped up in his art to give it away...let alone stand up to her....frank knows that gerard wouldn't stop him, even if he wanted to, frank knows gerard's heart strings are tightly pulled to his art....wow....i cannot wait for more! sorry things are so crazy at the moment!
aw, but it was a sad one. There's no way that Gerard can just leave Frank there all by himself, right? No, he definitely has to catch up with him. He didn't even get to say goodbye!
This story is the shniz, totally. It's super hot and I love it. I was thinking about it in church today... The part where Gerard kisses him for the first time. IT'S IN MY HEAD!
Yay update!! I don't think Frank's change was too abrupt at all, I love your characterisation of both Frank and Gerard. Stupid Gerard better get his ass running after Frank soon or I swear I might have to hit him. can't wait for more... Fay x x x