This story is truly amazing. I'm speechless. I'm sad that its over! I looked forward to getting and email every week saying that it had been updated!!!!!
i have chills all over my body. your words are so well written that even if you wrote a terrible paragraph (which is highly unlikely, seeing as you are such an amazing writer) it would be the best paragraph i've ever read.
please don't stop writing (maybe not this story, maybe not another. but just never give up writing). i'm hoping for a sequel? :) this story was just too amazing.
Nooo I didn't want it to end . Your story has been amazing and u are the best writer on mibba. Your story gave me something to look forward to every Monday . A sequel maybe ? Xxx
I would love to write a long comment telling you how amazing I thought this story was, but I'm going to try and keep it short and sweet.
When I first started reading this I thought it was awesome, and then when the drama got so big I didn't know what to think. Now that it's over I can just tell you that you did an amazing job, and I look foward to what you do in the future.
This is possibly one of the most inspiring stories I've ever read. You have an amazing talent for writing. I loved reading this so much. I'd probably read anything you write. Your story was amazing!
I'm a new reader/subscriber, as my amazing friend, Diamond Girl;; (Sydney) told me to read this. Recently, I don't like to read any new stories (especially original ones, I like fan fictions) - I only ever read a handful at a time, and then begin reading a new one after the ones that I read finish or fade out. But I am so damn glad I read this. I can honestly say that it is probably one of the best stories I have ever read. The way you write, with the words that you use, is fucking incredible. I'm literally speechless. The way that you build up a character's personality, such as Walker's or Lucy's (Walker is by far my favourite character, and I almost cried when he dies - and I am not one to cry, at anything, let alone a story) is incredible.
OMG! I cried so hard in the chapter...! Walker wasn't suppose to diee! Nooo! I loved him! :'( -sobs- But...maybe Mary will be a good girl and keep her promise. I very much hope so. <3 Don't break my heart like you just did with these past two chaptersss! Preetttttyyyy pweaseeee!? DD: -sniffles- Your...a good writer to btw, haha, thought i'd let you know. I've been addicted to this story for the past two days. I started it a few days ago, then my internet went out and I was like "FUCKKK! >O" I finally just got it back today so I've been like... -readreadreadreadreadreadreadreadread- So I'm rambling noww! <3 Loveee!
I can't clearly put my words in the right phrases (I think that the beginning of my comment is a clear example). So, I apologize if this is a mess. My good friend told me about this story on Monday night. To be honest, I didn't want to read it, starting from the beginning, seeing as it was 69 chapters. But, nonetheless, I started to read it, for my friend. By the end of chapter 1, I found myself hooked on the story. I read a total of 10 chapters the first night. My dreams? Completely taken over by your story. On Tuesday, I wanted to do absolutely nothing but read as much as I could of your story, but I wasn't home for a good portion of the day. That day? I read 35 chapters straight. Yeah, my eyes began to ache and were most likely bloodshot, but it was worth it. (I finished reading at 3:36 in the morning.) Today, I was determined to finish the story. I had been out with my mom a lot today, running errands. When we were silent, I couldn't stop thinking about the story. It had completely taken over my mind. A few minutes ago, I finished what remaining chapters I had left.
You have an extraordinary talent with words; you're writing is truly captivating. I found myself crying during about five chapters. Stories don't make me cry, unless they're fabulously written and are truly upsetting. The way you wrote everything made me feel like I was in the story, too, which is another good reason as to why I was emotional during a handful of chapters.
Truth be told, I don't know how I found the words to write all of what I did. All I had been thinking during the story was "Oh.My.God. I'm speechless."
Keep up the truly amazing work. I look forward to chapter 70 (and possibly even a sequel?) :)