Of course we're sill reading! This story is phenomenal. I didn't even have to re-read the other chapters to remember what was going on; you pieced it all together so flawlessly in this update. Thank you! Update when you get around to it. I enjoy reading it and I hope you enjoy writing it as well. More people need to comment! This is my favorite a7x story on this site.
You are too sweet! I don't k ow what it is, but people have been commenting less and less. On my stories too
It's quite upsetting.
Especially with a story like this! You deserve more comments, you deserve a comment per chapter from every person reading this story! It's so well put together and the plot twists are just epic! I hope Jimmy will find her! And Lacey is adorable in this story. She seems so genuine and kind Thank you for updating Looking forward to the next one! Have a lovely night.
How I missed this story! The ending was perfect! Oh drama! I would love to leave a comment with all my favorite lines (because lord knows there were tons) but I sadly have to get some sleep since I work in the morning I missed people who could write Jimmy in-character. Just saying. Your beautiful writing is always refreshing :)
That was the longest chapter I have ever read! And you kept my complete attention all the way through it! The ending was perfect; just enough to provide some closure to the chapter, but yet it makes me want more. Awesome job! :)
listened to some of avenged sevenfold's songs, and their amazing. and i also did my research !!! yay me !! i cant believe me and zacky have the same birthday. DECEMBER 11 bytches. i feel special !! but the story is awesome too, keep it up. your a great writer !!
Ahhhh im sitting outside reading this. It's the warmest day if the year and I'm reading about Halloween lol This chapter made me upset at the end. But leave it to zv to make things better O I wish shed stay :/
Wow her backstory part was amazing! I can see why Coral is so scared :( Jimmy's just adorable. He makes me so happy :3 The ending was just...wow. You sure know how to keep your readers intrigued. After that line, I am so hopeful the next update is soon! Loved it! ♥
“Honey, you ain’t seen nothing until you’ve gone down under.” One of the greatest lines ever :D
Technically it wasn’t a lie. She knew the general area where he would be… for all she knew he could be on the floor… the shower… maybe not even the bed. Again, holy shit this is amazing!!
What a long update! Thanks so much. You're so good about updating, I wish I could be :( I love Coral! She's such a likable character.
Awww poor Brian That was another great chapter I feel so badly for Jess, she's so alone. It's terrible And Larry is kind of annoying me. I know it's his job or whatever to keep the boys safe and healthy and he probably doesn't see what this is doing to Jess but damn! I love this though! Their conversations are so silly and lighthearted it makes me smile :D
I'm glad I'm not the only one who feels bad for what she gets her characters into...I'm really feeling bad for a particular plot point I'm writing right now between Brian and Jimmy.
I hope these interactions don't have the guys getting sick. I know that is bummed being on her own, but it really is for the best. Aside from Matt, they can all perform sick, but it would still suck.
Third-person perspective for a while, since it gives a more unbiased view of the characters. At least it does in my head :)
I agree! I love the way this one was written. The cute conversations make everything so real. I don't know anyone who could keep me interested in a story like this. There's just something about it that's more realistic than other fanfictions. You have a lot of talent, I will say that until I die :)
Great job, I wish this story had more comments, you deserve them!
Oh man. Things are definitely getting all messed up, but I have to say I'm not opposed to her and Brian sleeping together. I mean I know that she's got a thing with Jimmy and that he has legit feelings for her, but so does Brian. And I think Brian's had them longer. I just hope that Jimmy doesn't beat the crap out of Brian again. That would not be good. I kinda do wanna see Brian and Jess together though. Choices, choices. :)
Coral sounds really fun. You can totally tell she's gonna come to New York and surprise Jess (and Zacky). It'll be so sweet. I can't wait to see it!
I forgive you for the lag in updates. Life happens. Its just cool that you can go to all those concerts. ;) Please update soon though! I'm addicted, I've BEEN addicted to it. haha. I love it!