I Swear I Love You - Comments

That is meant to still be in Brian's view, it ends at the next separation, after Jess and him leave to get a drink/dance, where it turns into third person overview (since he is no longer there).

I'll try to go back and fix it, make it a bit more apparant.

Thanks for letting me know, sometimes when I read things back I don't pick up on things others would :)

I'm reading your story, so far it all made sense except for your last entry you added (Chapter seven). Is there by any chance you changed point of views anywhere in there because it doesn't seem to be Brian's point of view all the way through.

It started to make no sense around this paragraph: “Are you sure you don’t mind?”

I looked up at Jess and smiled. “Of course I don’t.” and then onwards down from there.

Haha this chapter was great!

ok, this chapter was amazing!!it made my day!
I laughed so hard through this; so adorable!
i love story story so much ♥♥♥

That's okay. Take you time. If you need suggestions to bounce off someone, I'm you girl :)
I loved the update! Sweetest thing ever!

awww cute
Brian is a sweetie...kinda lol

But poor Jimmy with his steak XD

so like him!

I loved that!

beautiful update!
I'm in love!!! ♥
and that would be the best job!!!!!

Thank you :)

@Aightball: I've just finished reading First Tour and I'm about half way through Europe, and I just wanted to say they are excellent to read. There were times when I was up half the night just thinking I would 'read one more chapter then stop' but found I never did.

This makes me wonder if she told Jimmy about her diabetes. If they've lost an entire weekend it won't matter, but wow. I'm interested to see how this turns out.

holy shit!
There were so many line that were just great to read!
Brian is so in character, it makes me get chills.
Amazing job!

I am really enjoying this story! It's very interesting and I can't wait to read more :}

Sorry about that, I increased the font size for you now :)

I don't tend to mess around much with the layouts so it was just set to the default font size, but I upped it now. Just let me know if I need to do anything else and I'll have a go at fixing it ^^

sorry its a tad bit hard to read, the font is so pretty but maybe make it bigger? i wuld LOVE to read this story, i just kinda cant see it * glasses are somethign I NEED to get hah*

I'm interested to see where this goes. She's made quite an entrance so far =).

Also, I hope this doesn't sound like a complaint (it might be my "old" age), but I had a hard time reading the font you chose. Could you possibly increase the font size?