Take a Breath and Hold On Tight - Comments

I seriously loved this chapter! John is a cutie-kinns! :D
Update soon please!!

Of course zombies come in. Silly, silly garrett.

oulalalala! (:
I see hearts in the future of Johnn & Harper xD

I'm a bitch. Kennedy loves me for it at least.

I have no clue why, but John is irking me for some reason :/

Bro. This is my favorite.
Ever.

I loved it. I can't wait to read more

I loved it. I can't wait to read more

You are an amazing writer, I've subscribed to most of your stories already! I hope you update them all soon (:

Fudge! I didn't finish!
Anyways, I was going to say;
I LOVE IT!! <3
It's great--keep up the great work!
Oh, and doesn't Johnny have blue eyes?

So EMOTIONAL!

This story is phenomenal. I absolutely love Harper's character.

John is too adorable! I love him more now!
I too started to tear up. So sad, :(
Please update soon! :)

Oh my John you are so cute.
And poor Harper! Her brother, bless him, he was so sad. this makes me sad

I would be with Pat it brings smiles to my faces!
(i have more than one face now.)

I wish she wasn't so sad all the time.
And I love John. So much.
:)

Yep. You sure know how to make me cry. I really can't wait until she opens up to John.

AND, pervy Kennedy is always awesome.

Oh my God.
I have to say, I looveeee Garrett in this story (:
"I think I want you. Right now."
HILARIOUS!
Looovinggggg ittt! <3

Harper's gonna get loud, real loud!

Awe! I love Pat! haha!
Man, I have a feeling that they're gonna get Harper drunk. And I'm not denying the fact that, that would be totally hilarious. Wow. that was mean. Sorry. Update pleasee! :)

Aw. I love Kenny-boo! Those outfits were cute! Andddd the outfit you picked for me, I have one just like it and the same shades of makeup are my usual!

I love how you're showing the early stages of John and Harper. How he's trying to befriend her by showing her it's not a bad thing she's shy. Anddd I love how you mention John checking her out. And Garrett being a dick some more.

For the party, I think she's gonna feel uncomfortable and John will be her knight in shining armor.

Oh man, party time :)
Good chapter!