Awwhh. I like it. Lots. I like the last couple of lines when she is talking about that fact that she fell in love. They are so cute together. But Oli better not screw it up with whoever he is texting. :/
Why in THE FUCK would she feel dirty with Oli?!?!?1 I'm sure every one of us would WANT to get dirty with Oli. ;D That's just silly. She needs to get over what other people think of her and give in to Oli's sexiness. lolo That would be my plan....
Aw, Oli is so sweet. I personally love the line, "He leaned against the window, looking cool and aloof." I said it to myself a few times before continuing.