Just Like You - Comments

loved the update.
can't wait for more

I really like this story. You write really well and stuff. The only thing that irks me sometimes, is like little words like "it" go missing or something like that. It isn't anything major, it just means I have to re-read the sentence like three times before I get what you say lol. Just proofread like crazy.
And at the beginning, you kept slipping between past tense and present tense, but I haven't noticed it as much in the later chapters.
It's just really little things that can be fixed so easily. Sorry if I seem compulsive, or bitchy or anything. I love this fic long time, yeah? :)
Oh, and the Ode To The Importance Of Comments, that was fucking hilarious. Like for realsss. :)

I love this. And I enjoy seeing the outfits. Please update soon!!!

I love this. And I enjoy seeing the outfits. Please update soon!!!

I'm loving all these updates.
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This story is amazing. I love it.

Awww, she's falling for the big oaf. I love that line with all my heart. And I honestly apologize for putting off commenting for a while now. I love the way you write, it's amazing. And this is such a well-written story with a great plot. A lot more people should be reading this.

I love the update dear.
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I just found this story and i really like it.
only one thing: in the last update you repeated the conversation with Matt a little bit after.
just letting you know so you can fix it.
i think your stories really well written. and i hope you update soon

Party it up!

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Luv luv luv!!!!!!

Great update like always.
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I think the outfits are fine. I mean they go with the charater.
but anyways....
Amazing update dear.
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I love your story and the outfits. I've been waiting for an update i was dying. Update soon

I agree with the comment above. ^
Some of the clothing is cute though, don't let that keep you from updating.

Honestly, I have no idea why you have so few comments when this is one of the few well written Oli Sykes stories. Do not let helpful criticism keep you from writing, I know I felt bad when I used to get it and leave my stories in-updated for weeks and even months. BTW, I have a question about the main character. Is she suppose to come off as slutty or something? :S that sounded really bad, it's an innocent question, sorry if I offend you.

This story is really great. Your writing style is pretty good so far and I think that this story will turn out amazing. I love how you've written this story during this coming summer's Warped Tour. The only thing that I really have found a fault with is the outfit's that you put in the AN's. They look awful. I understand that she's supposedly a "Pop Princess" and all, but please find better clothes. I know she won't be wearing "scene" clothes any time soon, but I bet there's plenty of pretty clothes out there for her to wear. It was just a thought though, you don't have to change the clothes if you don't want to.

<3
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You just made my day with this double update.
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Thank you so much for the double update, I was excedingly happy to see that =)
It's funny, I have a snow day too, except it hasn't really snowed yet...

hehehheheheh
I love ittttt, update soooon ! :]]]]