As You Wish. - Comments

Hahaha, I like him. =D

She should have stormed off and let him get lost in the laberith.
Update soon!

this story makes me giddy

I'm trying to wrap my head around his proposal. I really don't get it, but I know it means something...

still can't quite figure out Jack..

Outstanding job! update soon ^_^

I LOVE this!
let me just say that you got
yourself a new subscriber
=D
keep it up!

Can't wait for the next chapter. Jack is adorable. And I love the pictures of the palace; it's beautiful.
Update soon, my lovely? *<-- insert British accent here!*

Wow. This story has taken away my breath, and is making me hold on for dear life, reading and reading till I reach your stopping point, and I have to breath, or I'll die... The entire mood of the story is brilliant, and I agree with Chasing Rozette on the main character thing. She is so well created, dynamic and everything. A little typical, but it's a small world, and the best stories have Mary Sues (It's true, and you know it.). I can't wait untill you update. =]

Erica Lynne Reviews loves the look of the palace- but why are the libraries always covered in dark wood?

Amazing as usual.
You should update again, just for me. :D

PS-You should also update 'The Flour Shop', which is equally amazing. And maybe 'Persephone' too, if you're feeling generous.

its perfect ;) i love it. ohhh the suspense! x

Mm. Jack's a total sweetheart. This is getting suspenseful.
Gorgeous choice for Jack, by the way. I've held so many obsessions for Gaspard over the years.
I've used his face for someone in every one of my stories so far. Hahah.

wow! amazing!!! update soon

can't wait for more!

it was breath takingly beautiful <3

this is sooooo fantastic i hope that you update soon

omg i love it! your story is so awesome it makes me look bad in comparison lol =)

I agree with the comment above; I love this story!
I noticed that your discriptions were very good; it makes the reader feel like they can picture the story precisely.
As for the 'Queen' thing, I'm not sure, but I do think it's 'her Highness (or how ever you speel that) the queen.'
Anyway, I think that's it's pretty obvious that I love this story; keep updating, and good luck on making the next chapter this awesome! :)

I really like it! It's very promising.
Just a few little things I would like to tell you:
1) It is "Her Highness, the Queen" not "Your Highness, the Queen" (I think...)
2) I LOVE THIS STORY! :)
3) Your descriptions are exceptionally detailed, and I am very jealous.
4) The pictures at the end of the story were lovely! I am extremely envious of Sophia.

Love, you are doing absolutely wonderful. Your descriptions are so beautiful and detailed.
Especially the lovely dream in the beginning. You set off such a tranquil mood for the rest of the chapter(:
And how you introduced Sophia so profoundly before rushing into anything; remarkable. She's definitely a character I'm going to like and admire.
I love where you're taking this story so far ! Everything is coming together perfectly, and I feel it'll go far.
And the pictures at the end were gorgeous ! Where is that, exactly ? How lucky Sophia is to be in such a place. (:<