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  • celestial_royalty

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    I LOVE IT! (I'm only on ch 15 btw) Notes:

    2- Sam was hot. Hahahahha
    4- Seven grown men, the same who were had shown up for the surprise visit yesterday, were standing in front of me. Apparently, they didn't know how to call.

    "What the hell?" I said and stared
    5- lol decaying arm. So dramatic.
    Mr. Hit-On and Run's
    "You're not human. You're different aren't you?"

    "Yeah." LOLOL. I really don’t like the name Clara.
    6-What the hell is wrong with Seth? It’s getting really annoying.
    7- I think you mean “you irk me”.
    The La Push pack.

    Today just isn't my day...
    8- "Clara?"

    "God?"

    I heard a deep rumble. Haha. Again, “irked” not “erked”.
    9- Lol, floating objects. Jeez Seth -_- “I kept my eyes covered, and Sam and Emily made obnoxious smooching noises.” Cute. Ending…ouch.
    10- IRKED!
    13- Billy’s weird. -_- That’s just embarrassing.
    Jake added a few extra gummy worms while he stared me in the eyes, taunting me.

    “You’re weird.” I muttered.

    “You can levitate things with your head and you’re calling me weird?” hahaha
    14- "What is this?"
    "Well, it's Jake and Clara, and they're sleeping." I recognized Seth's voice.
    "No no no, they're not sleeping. Jake's cuddling." Embry snickered. Hehehe. This made me snicker. You spelled Quil wrong.

    I nodded, "Good luck trying to get him up." Yes indeed.

    I continued to ramble until I heard a loud thud and I turned to see Embry with a baseball bat and a very angry looking Jake. Quill was laughing hysterically over in the corner. HAHAhahahhaa.
    "If he kills you and you can't make it to the wedding, Sam's going to be pissed." I took a sip of my coffee and watched the fight unfold. Oh, and I think that’s “two broken ribs”. And it’s “mannequins”. I know this is going under “severe edits” or something like that, so just consider me helpful. ;] And good, she sure told him.
    October 24th, 2012 at 07:34pm
  • BSMSGIRL08

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    It's been a long time! lol I don't know how I lost this story but I'm glad I found it again! I hope you do a sequel!! (:
    November 13th, 2011 at 07:43am
  • Bluecaty15

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    i love it, when r u going to make the sequel!!
    August 30th, 2011 at 06:35am
  • Bamboo33010

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    I love this story very much!!!!!!!!!! Great job!!!!!
    July 16th, 2011 at 04:45am
  • EmotionalAngel94

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    ahhhh!!!!!!!!!! this story was AMAZING!!! sequel please! and soon :D you're an awesome author :)
    February 5th, 2011 at 05:46pm
  • Runaway Trains

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    Sequel please(: I love this story ! You're an amazing author !!!
    December 22nd, 2010 at 06:16am
  • MorningDoveofLight

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    The ending rocked my socks off!!
    Definitely awesome! :)
    December 13th, 2010 at 03:55am
  • In Love With Love

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    Eeee! I loved it! The ending rocked! It was was so sweet <3
    December 12th, 2010 at 10:53pm
  • heyit'sjordan_

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    I love this story!
    If you do end it please please make a sequel, I love it to much to let it go!!
    I hope to read more from you!!!(: <3
    December 6th, 2010 at 04:37am
  • In Love With Love

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    Oh my god! I'm in love with this! Like totally, seriously, in love with this story! Jake and Clara are such a great couple and you write the story wonderfully! I really can't wait for the next chapter! I totally subscribed! :D
    December 1st, 2010 at 03:18pm
  • PeaceOutDude123

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    I just read what you have up, all of it, and I really enjoy it. I obviously subscribed. There was one thing that kept popping out at me. Do you not really care for Bella? I mean, she's not exactly an amazing character, but still. I can't wait for more of the story. =)
    November 26th, 2010 at 10:43pm
  • kaylababee143

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    Oh em geeee you are amazing! Update asap please! I can't wait to find out wht else is going to happen! And wht happened to the Bragg brothers?
    November 24th, 2010 at 06:21pm
  • BubbleGumDrop

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    Amazing story. I usually don't read Jacob Black stories, but I really like this one.
    Keep up the good work ;)
    November 22nd, 2010 at 09:12pm
  • XOXloveangelXOX

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    love this story and poor clara :(
    November 19th, 2010 at 02:04am
  • winddancerx17

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    its becayse you are an amazing writer xDD i like the letter at the end, that was a really nice youch :) please update soon <3
    November 14th, 2010 at 10:13pm
  • XOXloveangelXOX

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    dont leave me hanging i want to know what happens next :)
    November 6th, 2010 at 09:01pm
  • winddancerx17

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    Noo!! Jakkee!! >.< This is realy good so please updae soon!!! :) <3
    November 6th, 2010 at 05:59pm
  • SilverGoddess

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    This has to be one of my favorite stories in the world please update soon pretty please with sugar on top
    November 4th, 2010 at 01:15am
  • octoberlover_1014

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    really truely love the updateeeeee, please add another chapter on!!
    November 2nd, 2010 at 04:12am
  • winddancerx17

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    yay!! you're back and the evil snowball fight!! MUAHAHAHAHAHA!! >:) soo there deffinately needs to be a sequel and major danger!! .....haha that rhymed XDDD so PLeaase write MORE!! :)
    November 1st, 2010 at 08:51pm