The Special Two - Comments

please update soon! i luv this story!!!!

Just read the story and I love it:)

Amen to the rant at Bella.
If Jacob imprinted on Clara, wouldn't he be pretty tore up too? Like just dying to see her?
Did he imprint on her?
I forget.
cc:
<3

I think Jake should be the one to fix things
considering they're his fault and all

I think she wasn't bitchy enough with Bella and she should try harder with Jacob. Probably should kill Bella and slap some sense into her imprint at that. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please

I've been reading this all night, and I think it's fairly safe to say that I love this story :D
Subbed, too (:

great story
lol i got mine done 6years ago it'll feel like a pinch

its amazing

K, fuck. One more thing: in that initial comment I left - the phat one, I meant to say "everything", not just "every". Here it was in that last sentence....

""makes everyTHING all warm and fuzzy in peoples' insides.""

P.S. You might want to invest some time in getting a beta for grammatical errors - there were a few and though I'm not as OCD as I used to be, it still bothers me when there are mistakes in a chapter.

...Not comments though.
:)

Oh em gee, like oh my gawh! Lol, I'm too hyper. It's 4:35 a.m. here and I juust finished reading what you've posted so far which is like, completely amazing... Legally Blonde is in the background...
:D

Gotta say though, I had a split-second where I was ready to go ape-shit when I realized I just finished reading the most recent chapter. Calmed down though, don't worry. And there was another instance an hour ago or something, where my internet cut off as I was going to the next chapter of this particular story (and when my computer loses connection, it loses it for the day. POOF, GONE!). So I made some pretty dramatic faces and even more alarming arm movements (that would make any gay man proud, Hey hey hey), not able to even speak - just look at the computer screen in HORROR.

UTTER HORROR!

That is what your story has done to me, Madamecrazybitch. Lol Oh god, Imma go to sleep now. Did you know I fell half-asleep as I was reading chapter... I can't remember what chapter, but it was like I was dreaming what I was reading. That purple background does wonders... No offense though, because I was only starting to fall asleep because I haven't been getting much sleep. It wasn't the chapter that was making me sleepy. O_O

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I like that Clara girl. She's nice. She's awesome although some character moves would have made me punch her in the face and walk away if she was actually a real person and we knew each other. Is she real? Have you based her off of someone? She's nifty all right, that Clara chick.

Jacob is whiiiiiiiiiped, oh my goodness. He's kind of a little bitch. He is such a little bitch! But your story makes me laugh. Hahaha~

Oh god I really have to go, I've written like a story about myself. Not sure how much I've talked about the story itself, but I really am trying to stay on topic.
D':>

^That's my hysterically sad face. You like?
:D

The Bragg brothers are a very interesting mixture to this awesome mix. It's that little bit of salt that brings out the full flavour to dishes. Although if I were to properly make that refernce, it would be your take on fiction and writing rather than fictional SIDE characters that makes every all warm and fuzzy in peoples' insides.

I hope you got what I just said.

:'(

Update soon lol

i 've wanted my belly button pierced for about a year now! and i might get one....anyway..love the update!

First off I have always (okay not always, just for about the past year) wanted to get my belly button pierced and I'm almost positive that in one year when I graduate from my private Christian High School (which freaks about any body piercings or tatoos) I am going to get mine pierced. So I can't really tell you if it will hurt or not since I have not had it done but I'll be looking to you for advice in a year when I get mine pierced!
Now, about the update, I loved how you described the room she was sitting in. I could see perfectly the dust particles dancing around in the light and all of the old books with the yellowed pages and it was as if I could even smell the room, almost like a musty library is how I imagined it. I think this had to be one of my favorite chapters just because of the writing. The metaphors, the imagery, the adjectives and adverbs all came together and flowed so wonderfully that not only did it make me fall in love with the chapter but it made me want to improve my own writing because your writing in this chapter was superb.
And you are very welcome for the feedback, I always want people to leave long, full of feedback comments on my stories so if I want those kind of comments I feel like I need to leave those kind of comments on other peoples stories.
Looking forward to the next update!

grrrrrr.
Where the hell is Jake ?
Ha , that made me sad and mad !
Loved this chapter (:

poor clara :(
update soon!! :D

please update soon

oh!! and please write more!! :DD

ahh!! damn bella to hell! -.-

i made the will you marry me list :)
hahahaha anyways,
the story is getting so good. and intense.
i cant wait for her birthday and to see what happens with Jake
keep writing!

sorry for not commenting on last chapter, I wasn't aloud to finish reading it, we had somewhere to go... Anywho, I don't have my bellybutton pierced so I don't know. And um, I want Jake back, so... yeah. I think first she called Alice, and then the Bragg brothers. That's what I think. Can't wait for the next chappy ;) UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please