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  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    I think I wanna punch Jake in his face
    March 9th, 2010 at 12:17am
  • why.LOVE.me?

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    I love it. Can't wait till you write more.
    March 8th, 2010 at 11:51pm
  • shanistaysfresh

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    i think his loyalty to her is realistic, I mean he was in love with her.
    But at the same time he imprinted on Clara, so his devotion should be to her.
    I like the way you write, everything is conflicting, just like it is in reality.
    keep it, and update soon please :)
    March 8th, 2010 at 10:56pm
  • Alchemyst

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    Stupid is what I think.

    Perhaps Jacob will get what's coming to him for being so 'loyal' to Bella. I dunno. You're the writer :)

    Nice job so far though
    March 8th, 2010 at 09:32pm
  • iron underneath;

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    I loves it dear!
    Update soon I commented *seeeee* lol
    I can't wait for the next update
    March 8th, 2010 at 06:31pm
  • reita19

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    great story please update soon
    March 8th, 2010 at 05:47pm
  • Jezzikuhrrr

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    i absolutely love this story.
    it's incredible :)
    you're a really talented writer,
    keep up the good work! :)
    xo Jess
    February 28th, 2010 at 11:39pm
  • TechnicolorFaze

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    I love this story!
    It's very original and interesting :)
    February 22nd, 2010 at 06:14am
  • XOXingridXOX

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    i really like your ideas
    February 21st, 2010 at 02:34am
  • Ella Bella

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    I just found this story and I think that it's great! It's defiantly an original and I'm really looking forward to reading more of it. (=
    February 19th, 2010 at 08:04am
  • WhisperTragedy

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    Clara is like Lord Voldmort.
    Killing those halfbreeds.
    Lolll...
    That was honestly the first thing that came to my mind.

    Update soon, please?
    I subscribed!
    Smiley
    February 19th, 2010 at 05:08am
  • XOXingridXOX

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    just read the story and i love it please keep updating and clara is amazing lol
    February 17th, 2010 at 12:17am
  • Keezy Cullen

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    Awesome Story!!!!!!!!!! Keep Writing ;-)
    February 16th, 2010 at 03:13am
  • northern lights;

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    This is amazing :D I love it :D Update soon pleasee :)
    February 15th, 2010 at 07:52pm
  • brokenarrow

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    O.o bastards!
    February 15th, 2010 at 10:15am
  • DarksMoon

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    What did she mean by this? "I was too stoned to hold up my walls" Because stoned is when you're totally wasted on like illegal, controlled substances. She's in a hospital right? Then I am confused, because if she's in a hospital she can't be like stoned. Confused?
    February 14th, 2010 at 05:13pm
  • kati

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    uberly luff this story:)
    can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep up the great writing:)
    February 14th, 2010 at 07:58am
  • Nessie101

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    Love itt!
    February 14th, 2010 at 05:38am
  • iron underneath;

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    I loooove this story its so awesome...I am doin this mobiley so that's why I don't usually comment I'm sooo sorry.:[
    February 14th, 2010 at 03:27am
  • Trig-ger

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    its amazing so far
    February 14th, 2010 at 03:23am