six: Still liking this. Descriptions were great and wondering what's going to happen next? Does Brian really like her as Zacky says or is he just the big brother that she never had as she says? Can't wait to read the next chapter.
five: The last line is confusing to me and maybe some new readers *or maybe just me*. Anyways, glad to know that she told someone. So what's going to happen next? Descriptions were excellent.
three: Descriptions and chapter titles are good. Hating Rodney more and more; wondering how angry Matt would get if he found out? Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Sounds interesting. Liking the descriptions so far and the school colors *two of my faves*. For the banner; might want to ask MusicMadness whose good and one of my friends. What's going to happen in the next? Can't wait to read and find out.