You hav to do a sequel since you said "That was the start of a whole new story." So you just have to, plus I want to see what happens with the baby. Update soon!
If you don't do a sequel where they get together I'm going to have to get a shovel out. I loved this story. And Rachel is such a fucking bitch. I hate that bitch. That bitch needs to die. And agh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can't believe Jon freaking messed up and cheated on her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you better make them get back together in the sequel when you write it!!!!!! I don't even want to think about having to get my shovel out :) I loved this and I'm so sad they aren't together, right now. *cough*cough* :) I loved this sotry and can't wait for you to write the sequel *wink*wink* ;) :) :) :D: D:D:P :P :P
OH EM GEEE!!! SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hope that answers your question!!!!!!!!!! You obviously can't leave me hanging like that! I LOVE THIS STORY! And unfortunately that was really good ending, and you have me hooked. I love this story tooo much I think. But too much love is never a bad thing.