I Swear I'll Change Your Mind - Comments

  • melt with you ;;

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    wow.
    this story is amazing! I'm not a huge Blackhawks fan, but I swear, this story made me one.
    Jon is so sweet! Seriously, if I met someone like him, I would have pounced on him already ;)
    Ashlee needs to stop playing hard to get! Just give in already!!
    Really awesome story,
    update soon, yes?
    March 6th, 2010 at 02:58am
  • Boom. Baby Boom!

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    Loved the update, but poor Jon. I really like the sarcasticness b/c it reminds me of me. haha
    And I just thought about how Jon went to school 2 miles away from my current location...crazy man!
    March 6th, 2010 at 02:50am
  • xoxomusic363

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    I love this story. ;) :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P Good update. I'm sad you cut it off there, but it makes me anxious for the next chapter ;) :D :P Love it, love it, love it. :) :D :P
    March 5th, 2010 at 12:33am
  • xoxomusic363

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    Awww. those last two chapters, I have to say were adorable. I loved how all the guys ragged on Jonny for acting like nothing happened!!!!!!!!! Haha...typical guy move :) still love him though. And then I love how much of a creep Austin is. ;) hahaha :) And I forgot to say on my last comment about when she said oh boy is she in trouble.......ya will be in trouble.......if she doesn't snatch Jonny soon, I will personally come into the story and snatch him up myself.....except I'll be nice and not bitchy about it. :) And then I'll give him to her when she realizes she lost her chance and go to Sharpie, my second love......or is it third??? (does he have a gf in this??? I forget.....(; hehe) But if Sharpie's taken I'll go to Pittsburgh and get w/Jordan Staal :) haha

    I love this story. :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P
    March 4th, 2010 at 04:36am
  • Renee Says;

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    Jon better change her mind! :)
    Amazing update..again!
    March 4th, 2010 at 03:55am
  • gurlygirl87

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    Totally agree with the comment above my. Jon is girl retarded. lol Loved the story, more soon please :)
    March 3rd, 2010 at 11:22pm
  • Renee Says;

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    I love this story! :)
    Jonny boy is girl retarded. Then again aren't ALL men?
    More soon?
    March 3rd, 2010 at 11:13pm
  • xoxomusic363

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    Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!! ( I think three lines were enough, don't you?)

    You can NOT, just leave it at that. Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope Jonny's not thinking he messed up!!!!!!!!! She needs to let him in already!!!!!!!! Oh, my gosh, that was so intense (at least I thought so...). Loved the update and I want more now!!!!!!! :) Love it, love it, love it :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P
    March 3rd, 2010 at 07:05pm
  • penschick8771

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    sorry you had a bad day : ( but thank you so very much for the update i cant wait til her and jon get together and make it official they would be good together but i have a feeling rachel isnt done trying to interfere with that process just yet. please update soon and amazing job as always : )
    March 3rd, 2010 at 04:49am
  • gummibears

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    she so wants to kiss him again lol
    March 3rd, 2010 at 02:29am
  • penschick8771

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    loved the updates i love jonathan i would have loved to have been able to just stare at jons abs lol hes soo adorable please update soon
    March 2nd, 2010 at 04:31pm
  • xoxomusic363

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    Ahhhh, ahhhhh, ahhhh!!!!! I'm practically hyperventilating right now. I would have loved to be in Ash's position, staring at Jonny's abs.....*drool* haha lol :) Geeze, she needs to snatch him away right now or I will :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P He is a complete sweetheart I love him :)
    March 2nd, 2010 at 03:32am
  • xoxomusic363

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    That chapter did not suck. That was an adorable chapter. I loved it. I'm so glad Austin is in the NHL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was so so incredibly sweet of Jon to do that for him :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P Makes me love him more ;) hehe loved the chapter and Austin better look out for Rachel. :) Loved it bunches :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P
    February 28th, 2010 at 07:21pm
  • xoxomusic363

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    Ahhhh, I love this story. It's like an addiction. Actually, any Jonny Toews story is an addiction to me....haha but I love this. I do. :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P: P Jonny is too cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ahhhh, I love him!!!!!!!! :) :D :P
    February 28th, 2010 at 05:44am
  • gummibears

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    ahh.... so cute. go blackhawks.
    February 27th, 2010 at 06:50pm
  • PKaneluv95

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    Ashlee is so bipolar it pisses me off sometimes..........I <3 this story!!!! Can't wait for the next update!
    February 27th, 2010 at 04:31pm
  • The8thDeadlySin

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    Oohhh. *singsong voice* she is jealous. Great story. Great chapters. What more could i ask for? Oh I Know! Update! Lol.
    February 27th, 2010 at 04:10pm
  • xoxomusic363

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    Oh no......what was Jonny doing with that other girl????????? Please don't let her do anything with Brent!!!!!!!!! Please, please, please!!!!!!!!!!! Love it though :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P
    February 23rd, 2010 at 01:30am
  • Boom. Baby Boom!

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    Love the update!
    February 22nd, 2010 at 08:53pm
  • Flower29

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    great updates...love the story! can't wait for more :)
    February 22nd, 2010 at 02:33am