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  • Hawkens222

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    I loved this very realistic take and actually it reminds me of exactly what happened in my real life when I finally told the guy I liked the I liked him. I love this because it's so much more true to life as to how things go and I love the peace Zack found even though it wasn't reciprocated, the same was true for me. Brilliantly written.
    June 18th, 2018 at 01:58am
  • Madam Shadows;

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    Another amazing story! Plus it's a Synacky story. I really loved how you ended it, it was like I, the reader had to decided whether Brian or Zacky would get together. I loved the chapter on how you put: "They call him Synyster Gates" and then: "I call him Brian Haner." I thought that was so cool, really thought out. <3 Probably one of the BEST Synacky stories I've ever read. ( :
    June 18th, 2012 at 03:32am
  • AM-PrAs

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    I've just read it.
    Well, it was awesome, as always.
    I love your ending, because it's different from the one's from the Brian/Zacky stories that i've already read.
    This was really cool =)
    January 17th, 2012 at 02:29pm
  • angy_something

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    WoW. I loooooved it. It's a greeeeat story. It has great description,feelings and it's just plainly greeeeeat.
    Love ya
    Ps. Maybe you should do a sequel or something. It's really good I would totally looove to read milord of it. It made me sad that I didn't find this sooner.
    June 28th, 2011 at 03:08am
  • Saoireia

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    Zacky has big ears -snicker- and i didnt even read chap 1 yet!! thats how distracting that picture was!
    December 26th, 2010 at 01:27am
  • atrocious

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    This was a great ending to an amazing story!
    September 4th, 2010 at 05:19pm
  • Naked_Zombie

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    Oh my.... the were tears! I tell you tears! xD

    I loved this so... ahg un-normal and irregular.

    I also adore how you left it hanging for us to interpret. Maybe there is something, maybe he excepted it, maybe he missed him being his bro, maybe maybe maybe WHATEVER.
    It was AMAZING <3
    September 4th, 2010 at 04:46am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    though I wished it ended differently, that was pretty good.
    September 3rd, 2010 at 09:36pm
  • D. Dixon

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    I like realistic. :] I do like happy endings, but you wrote this beautifully, so I have no problem with a pretty much bittersweet ending. :] Great job! I loved this story so much. ^_^
    September 3rd, 2010 at 05:11pm
  • IvoryJaied

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    Damn you! Damn you and your god-damned writing skills.

    At least is was a somewhat happy ending. Brian didn't die, Zack wasn't cast away completely, and they're friends!

    Sucky comment. You should be used to them by now.
    I'm gonna spam your Formspring now.
    September 3rd, 2010 at 12:40pm
  • atrocious

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    Awww, only one more to go?! :( This is one of my favs.
    September 2nd, 2010 at 06:19am
  • Naked_Zombie

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    Oh my.
    That last chapter was heart wrenching, but I loved it. Such a good twist from the normal plots
    September 2nd, 2010 at 05:01am
  • Ace.Spade

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    You know, for a person that doesn't write slash, this is really good, and thats a really good comment, especially from a person who doesn't normally read slash :)

    So wow, is Brian homophobic or something?
    August 31st, 2010 at 09:55am
  • D. Dixon

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    :O Last chapter?! I feel a sad ending coming on... :[ I loved this update; I definitely saw that reaction coming from him, but still it surprised me. More soon!
    August 31st, 2010 at 02:54am
  • im.just.destinyscene

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    Awh poor Zacky :( Good Chapter! Update soon
    August 30th, 2010 at 11:53pm
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    But you're pretty good at writing slash and holy crap, poor Zacky!
    August 30th, 2010 at 11:02pm
  • LyttleSynyster

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    Aww poor Zacky
    August 30th, 2010 at 10:57pm
  • LamePanda

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    HOW CAN YOU DO THIS TO ME?!?!?! AHHH!!!! POOR ZACKY!! I FEEL SO BAD!!!
    I honestly thought the feelings would be mutual ): ARE YOU GONNA KEEP THEM APART?!?!
    One more chapter!! GET IT OUT QUICK YOU!!
    ily (:
    POOR ZACKY!!! AHHHH
    August 30th, 2010 at 01:08pm
  • D. Dixon

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    I'm so glad they all took it so coolly. ^_^ Loved the update! More soon. :]
    August 28th, 2010 at 11:15pm
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    I liked it!
    August 28th, 2010 at 09:10pm