Aw, I'm sorry you're sick. :[ I hope you feel better! On that not, I think it was an awesome chapter. ^_^ I loved it! Italian cooking is the best. ;] More soon!
If you need any help with the slash part, just ask, I've been writing slash for a couple years now. ^_^ Loved the update! :[ Poor Brian. >.< More soon!
I really like he story so far. I understand your dilemia, I'm writing an incest for a contest and it's totally evading me unless I dont thhink of them as siblings. Maybe you should try thinking of one of them as girls, maube it'll be easier for you. Keep it up.
I really like this story! I think it has a lot of potential. :) For it being your first (I'm assuming) slash story, it's really good! Going much better than mine went. ;) More as soon as you can!