Turn Out The Lights - Comments

  • Do not let her leave:(
    October 4th, 2012 at 07:12am
  • oh im so sad she left ): how how could she?! poor matt. he's done some shit but he's grown up. oh ashley how could you leave your one true love! you must update again soon! 2 chapters left?! TT____TT he turned out the lights. oh my gosh!
    September 30th, 2012 at 11:21am
  • Oh my Mattie... he really was an asshole to Ash haha but I guess its what had to happen between them, otherwise they would be worse off than they actually were, everything happens for a reason I guess. I think that their separation will be a good thing, individually they need to get their shit together and to fight temptation to want to see each other, Ash moving is the best way for that to happen, kinda sounds like a drastic measure, but based on their history there is no way in hell they will leave each other alone if she is still in Cali. Im sure they will date other people which is a very good thing that way they can make sure they what they feel for each other is real and not have any doubts. Im really sad this is ending soon =( BUT im really stoked for the sequel!!! =D. awesome update hon! =)
    September 29th, 2012 at 08:14am
  • Loved this!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter, sorry it will be coming to an end!
    September 29th, 2012 at 06:27am
  • oh my gates... love the chapter can't wait :D
    September 29th, 2012 at 06:01am
  • oh wow.... loved this chapter. THis is so amazing :D
    September 10th, 2012 at 03:40am
  • haha mibba really messed up the layout! darn them!
    well i was hoping for some morning sex but no! so you owe. yes you doooooooo. you've been hidding your writing sex scene talent from us all! write all the sex with matt and asl hehehehe. i suppose she should go. i mean what will she stay for? i suppose there is matt but that cant always be enough. how will it be like last time? you know it goes, you want something when its gone or you wish you had it when you had the chance but then there is that oh maybe i shouldnt have done that (suffering from the same problem with clothes i just bought (howerever!))
    i think her and johnny's light has turned off. OMG! xD yes johnny turn out the lights on your relationship with ash. holy shit. hahaha.
    right okay, on to the story... matt is being such a cutie but i feel like its because she was with johnny and now she is leaving ): he seems genuine but i dunno after everything... he appears to have changed, but habits are hard to break. maybe when she comes back? if you are writing a sequel for them? i feel like the "grown up" them could begin. i think ive gone off topic!
    anyways LOVE this story :D
    .........................................................................write more sex scenes
    September 4th, 2012 at 10:06am
  • I really really want Ash to stay!! BUT I guess its for the best that she goes to Boston, maybe this will be a good chance for her to fully mature without any kind of drama bringing her back down. She needs to grow and figure out all of what she wants in life and I think that this move will help her a lot =). Matt...oh Matt I just love that man lol ive said it before and ill say it again I love this side of him! He more mature and he has no problem letting Ash know whats on his mind and opening up to her and thats good because at least now she knows how he feels and can leave without wondering what if they never talked things out or established what they are to each other now, the down part is now they might wonder if they made the right choice with going their separate ways and not live their new lives to the fullest. Both need need this separation so that they can be sure that their feelings for each other are real, which im sure they are, but this way they can erase any doubts about their relationship and start fresh =). Johnny has some damn nerve! Yea it might have been too soon for Ash and Matt to be together but he needs to remember that HE was the one who fucked up their relationship and is the reason they are no longer together, if anyone is the slut its him. I get that he was mad and didnt mean what he said but he still implied it so part of him must really feel that way. Overall he could have handled the situation a hell of a lot better than what he did, if he was scared he should have just said something to Ash instead of getting pissed and calling her names he was the one who cheated and he was the one who blew Ash off for her going away party, so he has no reason to get mad. Im shocked that they kissed though, but I guess it was good for their closure now they can leave the past behind them and move on =). Omfg Zacky's reaction to finding them kissing was just too funny, I can totally picture the look on his face! priceless lol. Im sad this is ending, I really love this story, I recently read it from beginning to the last chapter and I fell in love with this all over again, seriously amazing work hon! =) <3
    September 4th, 2012 at 07:07am
  • Wow the smut was just WOAH! I mean first Matt takes Ashley to Disneyland to make her remember her last day there. And then things got hot and heavy when they got back to Matt's place. And the last part just made my mouth fall open! So she has a decision to stay and be with her friends or she could leave and start a new. I look forward to the next update!
    August 13th, 2012 at 07:37am
  • I loved it XD
    UPDATE SOON
    I hope she stays...
    Can't wait to find out what happens
    AHHHH i'm going crazy not knowing XC
    August 2nd, 2012 at 06:15pm
  • holy sweet baby jesus! that was smoking hot. wowoowowowowowwowowowow. why haven't you been writing lots of smut before!? you should start. my goodness i was fixed on this for the whole 10 minutes of reading. OH MY GOD!
    matt is SO adorable when he wants to be. i think he has grown from everything. i really really hope she stays )))): i felt a little teary eyed at the end when matt was begging her to stay. OMG UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!
    August 2nd, 2012 at 08:47am
  • *pitchy* Holy shiiiiiiiiitt! The smut DEFINITELY made up for it, omfg that had to be one of the hottest, cutest and funniest things ive ever read, I just loved this chapter as a whole! Oh Matt, that sweet hulky S.O.B. lol, I just adored him in this chapter he was so sweet, caring and sexy, I love that side of him =D. I loved the day he planned for them, it was simple yet romantic and it really fit Matt and Ash's relationship, the day couldnt have gone more perfect! At first I was a little peeved at Johnny for not showing up at Ash's shindig, but when I really thought about it, I couldnt really blame him, its gotta be eating away at him all the stuff thats happened the last few months. It sucks more for him because he's so young and his first real relationship went completely down the drain before it could really take off, granted it was all his fault, but like I said he is young, he's only had one relationship and he'd only been with one girl, so naturally he would be curious and want to try more things but he should have asked Ash for a little break maybe then it wouldnt have been so bad for them, but hey sometime we have to learn the hard way and Johnny definitely is now. I hope he comes around for when its time for Ash to leave though otherwise he really would be kicking himself in the ass. Speaking of Ash, she definitely has a BIG decision to make now, I wonder if she will stay of if she will go. I wouldnt put it past Matt to use his deliciousness to persuade her to stay, I mean if he asked me to stay after that sex I wouldnt even think twice to say hell yea ill stay LOL. I cant wait to find out her answer, im really excited to see how this all plays out!!

    Fantastic update hon, I loved it from beginning to end!! =)
    <333
    August 2nd, 2012 at 08:14am
  • Stay stay stay!
    Amazing chapter!
    August 2nd, 2012 at 08:10am
  • YAY... TEAM MATT uhu \o/. Love this chapter. Matt's kiss heat me up :D. They should deff be together and she shouldn't go. Matt should run after her. Great chapter. Please update soon
    June 21st, 2012 at 08:09am
  • Woo!
    Go Matt.
    I'm sad this story is almost over.
    June 20th, 2012 at 06:53am
  • love it too much
    awww matt is so cute and he is saying such beautiful things.
    more soon matt should go and surprise her
    June 20th, 2012 at 05:57am
  • i just love this update and I'm glad that Zacky finally came clean and she found found that he's just scared that she's grown up and doesn't need him anymore to protect her and look out for her. Awww big brothers

    I just loved her "date" with Matt and wow he confessed that he still loves her. Will be interesting to see what happens next.

    I'm glad that she went and spoke to Johnny, and whilst he's got no-one to blame but himself, I kinda feel a little sorry for the little dude as he's lost the best thing that ever happened to him. I had to smile that his mum gave him a hard time too
    June 20th, 2012 at 04:34am
  • I teared up a little when I read the scene with Johnny and Ashley, It was great while it lasted between them but they just werent meant to be, friends? definitely. Lovers? not so much. Im glad that they had their closure since the whole break up thing had been hanging over their heads for months. Matt and Ash's "date" was awesome I loved it, im glad that they didnt try to take things further than what they agreed on because in the end it would just lead to disaster and there would be no way to repair their relationship, so what they have now is great =). Im so glad that ZV and Ash were able to patch things up i was worried that wouldnt happen until just when she was about to leave. I understand Zack's frustration, honestly I would feel the same way he did, and I know it took a lot for him to face his fear and accept the fact that Ash isnt a little girl anymore and she is finally becoming a woman, but he did great at explaining his actions to her =).

    Awesome update! =)
    June 20th, 2012 at 04:12am
  • I loved it
    i can't wait for more to come :P
    June 19th, 2012 at 10:31pm
  • OMG my heart ached when I read the part with Johnny and Ashley! I just wanted cry so bad because Johnny already knew that the relationship between him and Ashley is done because the trust between them has been shattered. But the love and bond they shared will pave the road for them further down their lives, the relationship taught them many things about life. So Johnny's mom got after him when she found out about his affair! I love her! I think the talk between Matt and Ashley is adorable! Even though Matt was able to find her weak spot that left her like jello! XD And Zacky finally confessed that he is angry mostly at himself because he won't be able to protect Ashley like he did. He has realized that she is growing up everyone is and he needs to let her go so she can pursue her dream. I can't wait for the next update!
    June 19th, 2012 at 06:26pm