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  • Nanook

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    Hmm, so... this hasn't been updated in years, a really long time, but yet... I somehow still stumbled across it and managed to read it in one sitting.
    I really enjoyed what you had of this story; I'm bummed that it was never finished. :/ And it kind of left off where Alex and Serena had just gotten together, so we didn't even get to see a lot of the cuteness of their relationship. :( Aww. :/
    I love how you wrote each of the ATL dudes in this. Jack especially; it's been a while since I've genuinely laughed at things a writer has him do in a fanfic, and this one had me laughing at several points. :)
    It was kind of weird though, how Alex was suddenly able to decide to call off the arranged marriage. Like, usually, that's not the case or it isn't able to be done. Along with that, if his parents knew about his underlying feelings for Serena, and/or loved the idea of her with him more than Natalie, why wasn't she just set up for the marriage? Like why Natalie? That aspect just kind of confused me, and also the fact that that idea was kind of put on the back-burner when that's on the summary/main page of the story... but I guess you had to move things along, so... idk.
    But this being said, I really did enjoy what you had of this story. I think you're a great writer; it's been a while since I've stumbled across a new story and read it in a day. Lately, I've been going back to ones I've read before because I've been struggling to find any good new ones. So kudos for writing one that kept my attention. Also, thank you for writing a cute relationship like Alex and Serena's; you had a good build-up until they finally revealed their feelings, with subtle hints at their jealousy and emotions they were hiding.
    Again, it's been so long, so it's probably pointless to ever hope for another update to this, let alone, it be continued even more than that, but... I just wanted to comment to let you know that if by some miracle you ever do get on here again, and find the inspiration to finally continue/finish the story, I will be here to read. Hoping maybe this comment may somewhat inspire you. I think it deserves an ending, even if it's just a final chapter wrap-up or something. Like, with Alex finally ending things with Natalie, hopefully having Alex and Serena work out, etc. Would love to know how it all ends for them.
    If not, I hope this comment at least brought a smile. Even after all these years, people like me are still stumbling across your story and enjoying it. Bummed that I never read it when it was initially being posted; definitely would've helped contribute to the comments you were asking for. But alas...
    At the very least, I just wanted to let you know that I think you're a great writer and hope you haven't stopped, even if it's just on your own time. If you ever find yourself writing on here again, even if it's not for this story, feel free to let me know, because I would love to check any of your writing out.
    Hope that you see this comment. <3
    April 3rd, 2018 at 10:09am
  • rivals are insane

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    love this so far :D
    October 6th, 2010 at 11:10pm
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Very cute.
    September 17th, 2010 at 07:02am
  • h8 lyfe

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    I ust caught up reading all your updates. I wasn't getting any emails about it >.< Then I remembered this story and glad that I bookmarked it.

    I really hope Jack doesn't like Serena in a way other than his BFF. That would just ruin everything. EVERYTHING!
    August 17th, 2010 at 08:18pm
  • mademoiselle

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    Tots agree with ^
    can't wait for the next update! <3
    August 10th, 2010 at 08:19am
  • Music.DrownLife

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    The boys are so cute.
    I think Jack has the hots for Serena.
    August 10th, 2010 at 07:25am
  • mademoiselle

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    “I remember because it made me so angry. I wanted to rip her head off!” he said.
    Oh my gosh, how sweet is that? I think I just turned to goo.

    FAVOURITE PART EVER! Hahaha, loved it! And I also think Natalie should die in a hole :)
    Can't wait for the next one!
    July 21st, 2010 at 09:20am
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Serena thinking it's cute that Alex wanted to rip Natalie's head off, that is funny.

    Jack does need a life and an insane girlfriend.
    =D He should pick me. Haha.

    I'm really shitty at making layouts, but I do make them. I'm not being modest, really, I am dick at them.
    July 21st, 2010 at 08:05am
  • steffm15

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    I was drawn to this story by the title, considering that 'Weightless' is one of my favorite ATL songs, and I have to say that I absolutely loooooooooooove this! I can't wait for an update! :D
    July 21st, 2010 at 05:17am
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Dude! Haha! I love the guys! Zack and Jack... Rian last, because, well, you know?
    What's Alex's woman back home gonna think? I can't wait for that, but I will.
    July 11th, 2010 at 09:56am
  • mademoiselle

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    alex and serena are so cute :3
    July 11th, 2010 at 09:21am
  • mademoiselle

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    ngawww that was adorable <3
    July 7th, 2010 at 01:57pm
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Yes! I love airport moments!
    Go Alex!
    July 1st, 2010 at 07:58am
  • Bones;

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    Aw, that was so cute!
    You must update soon!
    July 1st, 2010 at 05:40am
  • Music.DrownLife

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    My favorite part was all the mother fuckings being yelled. It was perfect; it makes me want to hug Alex and slap him at the same time.
    June 24th, 2010 at 09:00am
  • blaqrican13

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    getting good....cant wait 4 more
    June 15th, 2010 at 05:05pm
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Wow. That was an emotional chapter. I probably would have done the same thing Serena did, the desolate thing. What was she to do? Run into his arms and tell him she loves him? No... Shutting yourself away from him and the rest of ATL is what you do. But, what after that? I'm happily waiting to see.

    And, woo! No math!
    June 14th, 2010 at 08:36am
  • whistler

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    AMAZING!!! BUT I CAN'T FREAKING WAIT THAT LONG FOR AN UPDATE!!!!
    June 13th, 2010 at 06:18pm
  • lost-in-stereo

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    I just started reading this tonight and I LOVEEE it! I don't get why you're having a comment shortage or whatever because this story is really good! I just want Serena and Alex together, and not just physically. Hahah, that sounds really awkward. (x

    no, but seriously - this is amazing. Update soon :D
    June 2nd, 2010 at 08:41am
  • Bones;

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    Oh my gosh!
    I've been reading this, and, it has to end with a cliffhanger.
    Update soon????
    For me?
    No, i'm not asking, I'm DEMANDING.
    I love this story.
    June 2nd, 2010 at 05:23am