June 1st, 2010 at 09:50am
Yeah, 'seriously, oh my god'! I keep getting surprised by your updates. I really liked how you did this one, too. There wasn't too much detail about them leaving that could have really dragged and got boring. It was right to the point, and I liked it. But, I said that once. I wonder if anyone seen them...
Ooh. I really like that dress.
I think you should write out the other story chapters, for your new stories, and only update this. That way it'll be easier. Well, that's easier for me when I update and stuff. I have so many stories waiting to be posted. If it were me, I'd lose focus and lose my appeal to the story.
can't wait for more <3