Dichotomy. - Comments

Setting your goals. Dig it. BUT I WANT MORRRREEEE. :3 Wonder what they'll do... sit and talk or do whatever they did year(s) before.

Baha! The arguing was my favorite. I always love stinging retorts. A few of them were so good they made me groan out loud in amusement.

“Well, when you figure out why you hate yourself so much, let me know, T.” Dang skippy, Tom. Kid knows what's up.

“When this all goes to hell, I just want it on the record that this was all your idea.”
Yup. Brendon's fault.

...and like Ciatosaur. said, serious character development. It's gonna blow.

I really liked this chapter.
I'm kind of wondering why Brendon went all quiet.
I don't know why but it was really hard for me to type "all quiet" without finishing it as "All Quiet On The Western Front"
Anyways. She got some serious character development with the hate/love list.
I'm starting to consider making one of my own.

I bet she'll add Brendon's name to the love column by the end. AND ONLY 10 CHAPTERS YET? Wow.

“When this all goes to hell, I just want it on the record that this was all your idea.” adksjfalkj BEST LINE IN THE HISTORY OF THIS STORY.
Me gusta the dedication.

New reader, and honestly, I love this story. c:
Your writing is great.

UGH YOU TEASE.

Screenwriting class is greedy like Brendon is.
...not that I'm complaining or anything. But these kids need to work out their issues, ya hear?

They are going to have babies one day. <3

I have a feeling Tom is the one who brought out the liquor.

And I also have to say that I love the sexual tension way more than anything when it comes to those two. Sheesh. Zowie. Hubba hubba.

The last two comments sum up what I wanted to say.
I <3 this story.

I concur. I want more Tom. He's cool. And dang it, why couldn't Spence catch 'em?
And it is definitely heating up.

Loved the shout out! Thanks for that. Also, I loved the update. I would like to see some more of Tom. He's a smartass.

ROADTRIP? EXCITING UPDATE?! ROADTRIP?!
Lucky. And get that update in soon, gurl. Won't you bet Spencer finds out next. And I'm also wondering why Bden was all... nice. Weird. Maybe he's - oh, my - falling IN LOVE.
What if.

I really love Tom, a lot. He's a good best friend.

Woot wooot, they did itttt! Sorry, that kind of makes me happy; they have to give up the acts soon enough.

I just read this whole story in two days and I love it. The chemistry between the characters is great. I can't wait until you update again.

I hope you update soon! :)

afjdskjadsklfsk He's afraid. Flailing fingers. Oh my. I can't wait to see how this goes when they're on tour. I bet you one of them snaps and then Spence finds out.