Ch 15: OK, I really like Haley. She is awesome, and has a lot of potential as a total smartass. I very much appreciate that she winds Brendan up enough to lead to a rather spectacular breakup. By the way, I enjoyed the breakup scene. Even if it took him a whole day to get to it, at least he got to the point very quickly. If only most boys had the decency to just come right out with it that way, the world might be a better place, with a drastic cut down of cheating-in-the-hopes-of-being-dumped and so on. It was a bit brutal; who wants a breakup to be the first words out of your man's mouth after being gone for weeks on end, after all. Nevertheless, THANK YOU. Now, let's see if he and Tina can get together, the way they want to. On a side note, is the business Tina & Tom had to get to involve the whole ex-lead singer asking after her? Are we going to find out next chapter? Thanks for writing&posting! Hopefully this has taught me to check email more often, so I can pay attention to updates. It was lovely; cheers! Looking forward to the next!
Hello! I'm not sure how you managed a double update without me noticing, but hey. Ch 14: Erm, Tom has/had a crush on Spencer? Or did I totally misread into that opening conversation? Anywho, I love how she fell in love with being part of Panic! and also how nervous she was about being done. Yay! that they asked her back. Spencer's such a sweetie. It was very cute that she was all surprised over fans wanting pic with her, though if such an awesome female guitarist existed, and then played with those boys, I'd personally be pulling out the hero-worship. Moving on, the whole conversation about Kellie: how cold can you get about the girl you've been dating for a long time? Eesh, Bren, you're kind of a jerk. And then he completely screws over the reader's chance to find out a bit more about her. Hmph. <3
you deserve more credit because a)you are an amazing writer and b)this story is ... I can't even describe how good it is so please do continue :) Update soon !