Color Me Perfect - Comments

This story is so fucking amazing. But I dont get why everyone keeps getting confused, it`s not confusing to me. Zhyler is so bi-polar, but hard not to love. You`re great at personalities. Blaine is so cute, innocent, and sweet. Though it kind of seems as if Kayden uses him to feel better about Zhyler. Anyways, of to read more. I had a lot of catching up to do.

O.o double post. Epic fail.

Once again, I love the way you've written this. You could have just written it in the same way that 90% of people write, but the style you chose to write in fits this story so well. The way this story is written pulls you completely into the story. The emotions seem to just jump out at you, and you can actually feel everything that the characters are going through. All right, I'm done being analytical. I loved this update, and I like reading from Zhyler's POV. It's a nice change. (Although I do miss seeing things through Kayden's eyes.)

Once again, I love the way you've written this. You could have just written it in the same way that 90% of people write, but the style you chose to write in fits this story so well. The way this story is written pulls you completely into the story. The emotions seem to just jump out at you, and you can actually feel everything that the characters are going through. All right, I'm done being analytical. I loved this update, and I like reading from Zhyler's POV. It's a nice change. (Although I do miss seeing things through Kayden's eyes.)

I really like Zhyler. He really loves Kayden. I can't wait to see what he does to get him back. XD

Love this chpater, like all of them, of course :)
I see this chapter is inZyhler's pov again. I'm wondering, is it going to stay that way? 'Cause that would be pretty refreshing. Lol.

i almost cried when i saw this update.
i loved it as usual. <3

I'm having trouble remembering who's who and it's fine. (The not able to reply to all the commits.)
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omg, i absolutely loved that chapter. it was so super amazing. keep it up, :]

Wow that chapter was great. I loved it.

It sounds like Zhyler is finally going to live in his color full time instead of in the gray. You say you would do anything to get him back so go and do that anything. His reaction to your walking away clearly says that he wants you to. Hope Zhyler makes some sort of move to get Kayden back soon. Thanks for the update! <3

I'm kinda torn in emotions, I'm really happy that Zphler finally realized what he had, and that he wants him back, but I'm also pissed at what he done to Kayden, and I think he should just leave him the hell alone, but lets hope with the next chapter, one emotion or the other will be more powerful and take over(I'm kinda hoping for the good one)

:/ I love it

Oh that's so sad. But so beautiful. That was a really amazing chapter. So much feeling.
XD

I haven't been on here in sooo long.
I feel like a horrible subscriber for not commenting...
:|

This story is amazing. I absolutely love the way it's written. It pulls you into the story about...300 times better than what a story written in the traditional format does. I can't wait for the next update!

I don't know. >.<
Ahhhh.....
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can i just say that you are an amazing writer? i mean, i'm big on punctuation normally, but this story makes me forget that punctuation marks exist outside of quotations. this chapter was great. i figured it was Zhyler when i reread it because i got confused. but i loved it. is Zhyler going to tell Kayden that he's sorry ?
cant wait for your next chapter. great story. [:

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i love yer style for this. lol.

Oh em jizzle! You wrote in Zyhler's pov. This chapter was so deep. Lol. Then again all of them are. Haha. I really liked it. And this second half is just as wonderful as the first :D Keep up the awesome work.