Shattered By Broken Dreams - Comments

  • SynnerSaynt

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    And a Legend he is!
    I loved how you put the quotes in there!
    February 18th, 2010 at 03:13am
  • DiamondInTheRough.xo

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    That was totally awesome and unique how you put in Jimmy's quotes =D
    February 18th, 2010 at 03:07am
  • NineLies

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    brian is so creepy. and sadly he reminded me of my daddy and his guns. it's hard being a teenage boy trying to date a girl in texas.
    but i love melody and blade so much! they're so cute!!!
    February 18th, 2010 at 02:24am
  • DiamondInTheRough.xo

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    I swear i love Brian he is so hilarious.
    Always scaring poor Blade lol
    February 18th, 2010 at 02:20am
  • Seven.

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    haha. Brian reminds me of my dad. Cleaning a shot gun whenever I even thought about bringing someone home. Thank God for crazy ass fathers. XD
    February 18th, 2010 at 02:11am
  • Dame Chance

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    oh, damn. syn knows everything! jeez...
    February 18th, 2010 at 12:57am
  • choirgirlx3

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    love it sooooo much post more soon!!!!
    February 17th, 2010 at 05:16pm
  • Derpina.

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    Hahahahahaha omfg that was hilarious! I love that he calls him Baker now that its like war. >_<
    Blade and Melody are currently my favourite point of views. :) They're just so freakin cute!
    February 17th, 2010 at 08:53am
  • Just.a.Reader

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    I'm about to start reading this story, but I decided to leave a short comment first. Although I'm normally a very silent reader (something I'm not that proud of, might I add), I couldn't resist to give you a little feedback.

    I just love this! I started reading just yesterday and I couldn't stop. I love how it's so original, but at the same time you were thoughtful enough to develop the characters' personalities based on what we, as their fans know about them. I love them (except for Sydney, I really don't like her :P), and I love the relationship they have as a family despite all the ups and downs they've been through.

    On another note, it's really special how you've made Jimmy the centerpiece, the 'backbone of the family'. I love how you include some of his most famous quotes and make them part of their story, and part of the reason why the characters are so attached to him and love him so much. I know that's only one of the many reasons why we loved him so much.

    Also, I can see a message behind this story. The message to never take anything for granted, to love with all your heart and cherish what you have. The message that family is the most important thing, and by family I don't mean just those you share DNA with; but those very few whom have been with you through thick and thin, and taught to how to deal.

    I said this was going to be a short comment, but I guess I was mistaken. :P Keep it up, you're doing a wonderful job. Congratulations!

    Tzofi.
    February 17th, 2010 at 07:16am
  • NaiveDove

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    This is so good
    February 17th, 2010 at 06:55am
  • moviemaniac888

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    Aww Lyric and Jonnie are getting married. :D

    and that scene with Blade and Melody was adorable. and Brian was great: i have a gun and you have 10 seconds to get out my daughter's window. love it. haha.
    February 17th, 2010 at 06:24am
  • SynnerSaynt

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    Poor Blade! The boy can't get a break! lol
    February 17th, 2010 at 06:15am
  • DiamondInTheRough.xo

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    aww lyric finally popped the question it was so cute how he did it!
    and brian is hilarious lol
    February 17th, 2010 at 06:13am
  • NineLies

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    AWWWW!!!!! I want a story with Melody and Blade... since their relationship has the most room to develop out of everyone. I think it would be precious :)
    February 17th, 2010 at 06:12am
  • secrets-that-die

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    lol, brain and blade
    February 17th, 2010 at 05:58am
  • a venom

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    that update made me laugh
    can't wait for more
    February 17th, 2010 at 05:46am
  • a venom

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    aw i loved the updates
    wonder how bad johnny is going to freak?
    more soon?
    February 17th, 2010 at 05:24am
  • SynnerSaynt

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    Aww!!!! Lyric proposed to Jonnie!
    And, yes... Riley is gonna have to help pick up Johnny off the floor!
    That is so cute!
    February 17th, 2010 at 05:21am
  • i_love_to_syn

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    Awwwwwwww!
    I love this story so much, and I'm glad things are working out for all of them!
    February 17th, 2010 at 05:17am
  • Dame Chance

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    i feel even when matt is trying to be serious, it ends up being hilariously amusing :D
    February 17th, 2010 at 04:34am