Pearl and Silk - Comments

^ i agree with pieces, when i got an email saying you'd updated pearl and silk a part of me, a big part of me kind of got stoked off my ass aha. i really do love this story, and the fact that you're making it a retelling but still making it your own is really great. i love derek and odette and how innocent they were even in such a hard situation, and i really do love how you describe each and every action to the point where the reader has a perfect picture of it in their head.

I'm really, really, really in love with this story Jes, and believe me when i say i'll be waiting impatiently for the next update. I can't wait until their older, i'm so excited for it!

admittedly, i squealed like a little girl when i saw this was updated :)

Aw
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He never came.
I'm excited to see what happens next now!

Keep up the good work =) I'm loving it.

This is one of the most well-written stories I've read on here. I can't tell you how amazing this is, really. It's breathtakingly gorgeous in SO many ways.
<3

So freaking excited!!!

i'm really excited for this!
the prologue was really great, jes :) I am definitely very stoked to see more

i like it so far....Can't wait to read more!

I adore the layout and everything so far. Just one thing. I find the font a little hard to read. It kinda distracts me:)
But it's ok, because honestly the plot rocks. ^^ Keep up the good work :)

YES!

Oh, this looks awesome. The layout is beautiful, as well as the summary. And I always love re-telling of fairytales. Can't wait! :)

Yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes!!!!!!

yessssssssssssss

I've never heard of Swan Lake, but this certainly grabbed my attention.

I'd definitely read this.
big fat yes on my part :)