Farther Away - Comments

  • guess not
    November 12th, 2012 at 08:26pm
  • alex and her get together
    November 12th, 2012 at 08:08pm
  • VALIUM VALIUM VALIUM VALIUM!

    I am so sorry that I disappeared off the face of this planet for four months. I was living in an alternate universe where I was married to The Rev and the rest of the Avenged were my slaves!

    Okay, not really, but I wish that was what I'd been up to! In reality, my computer had a stroke and it took this long for us to get a new one.

    I went to an Avenged concert. My life is now complete.

    And lots of the stories I'm subscribed to have ended. I'm having a terrible time catching up to them all!

    Loved it! I guess I might need to move on to your other stories...haha.
    February 11th, 2011 at 11:40pm
  • If you mean a sequel where Ian and Nikki are grown up.....then I approve. Lol. :)
    September 22nd, 2010 at 10:36pm
  • Aww, so adorable. =}

    I love you, Val, I really do. If we met in person I think we'd make great friends.

    I swear I didn't mean that creepily or anything....

    ....Maybe a little.

    Loved it! Can't wait for more, Valium!
    August 14th, 2010 at 06:09pm
  • I shaved and washed my face,

    ....All I got upon reading that was an image of Lana actually shaving her face and suddenly screaming, "JESUS CHRIST! I JUST NICKED MY FUCKING CHEEK! GET ME A BAND-AID, PRONTO! AND SOME ALCOHOL!" "What's the alcohol for?" "FOR ME TO DRINK, DUMBASS!"

    Anyway. Hm, what is Alli holding up this show for!? Wow, that sentence got intense towards the end. The "!?" combination makes everything intense!? See!? Instantly intense!? Like, you could say, I got a kitten!? and people are like, "Woah. That's crazy!?"

    Okay. I need to concentrate.

    Well, I am very happy that Brian got his britches on straight and decided to walk her down the aisle.

    Loved it!
    August 3rd, 2010 at 09:01pm
  • It IS such a head trip when an author skips years on ya without any warning! It's like, "So this is what being in the future feels like!"

    Hm. Brian should stop being an ass about Zane. It's been two years. Two freaking years. Lana has gotten over it and crossed her bridges and that should be enough for Brian, but oh no, he's gotta be difficult.

    Brian is so lucky he is pretty, or I would not tolerate him sometimes.

    Loved it! Can't wait for more! Hopefully Michelle will knock some sense into Brian. Or threaten to hold out on him until he gets back in line.
    July 29th, 2010 at 02:38am
  • Rose basically hit the nail on the head.

    Hopefully Lana will come to her senses and start eating again!

    I could never be anorexic. I love food too much.

    Loved it! Can't wait for more!
    July 23rd, 2010 at 09:03pm
  • I love the story spent all day reading it. I love Jay to bad he's engaged lol and not real.I can't wait for you to update. I love most of you're author comments too.
    July 13th, 2010 at 04:36am
  • Hiiii i love this story & i finished reading the chapters on here so far & its 12:32AM so yea can't wait for the rest
    July 11th, 2010 at 06:33am
  • Jay can always make me laugh I wish i had a friend like jay. your story made my day a little better
    June 23rd, 2010 at 05:43am
  • I love Jay. If he was real, I would marry him. Freaking Alli. She wouldn't stand a chance.

    Yay! She saw her father!

    Not yay! This story is ending! ={

    Can't wait for more! Loved it!
    June 22nd, 2010 at 04:02pm
  • Jay had me laughing my ass off in this chapter
    June 22nd, 2010 at 06:09am
  • Ooh, the new story sounds good. And it's good that you enjoy writing it! Because that makes it so much better to read as well, when you've put your heart into it and it means something to you. I'll definitely be reading it!

    Hm. Tsk tsk Lana. I'm not sure if just calling her beautiful will work...Once people with bulimia or anorexia think that they're ugly or not good enough, they won't listen to anyone else's opinion. And Lana's stubborn too. She really needs to see her dad. =}

    Loved it! Can't wait for more!
    June 1st, 2010 at 03:57pm
  • Lol my favorite line was when Cam said “Fine. Go. But if you get hurt or die I’ll kill you.”
    May 30th, 2010 at 09:30am
  • Aww, they kissed and made up! But of course all good things must end. This will be no different. DRAMA!

    Loved it!
    May 28th, 2010 at 01:55am
  • I'm scared that something bad will happen. I like stormy(: awesome chapter
    May 27th, 2010 at 03:01am
  • DAMN IT! I was planning on stealing Jay. He's adorable and random and hilarious. Damn that Alli. You know, "alli" with an accent on the i means "there" in Spanish. I just now made that connection. Wow. I'm a loser.

    I'm glad you're back, but tremendously sad that you are in pain. Imagine this: You are in the grocery store. Shopping for...sponges! And as you're walking along down the aisle, you hear a gasp behind you. You turn around to find Avenged Sevenfold standing there making googly eyes at you. Upon seeing you turn around, they all squeal like school girls and run quickly away, hiding behind the shelf and trying to be sneaky but failing miserably. You go to the cashier, pay for your sponges, and step out of the store. You head home but get in a car crash. You are not hurt. You climb out of your car and realize that Avenged Sevenfold was in the other car. Zacky yells, "You were that sexy beast in the grocery store!" Brian falls in love with you on the spot. So does Matt. They begin to fight, but you want something out of it, so you tell them to get in some swimsuits and fight in a pool of jello, just for your amusement. They do. But you've already run off with Zacky to do the dirty in the woods among the leaves. The end.

    Feel better soon, Valium! Loved it! Glad Lana and Stormy are getting along. =}
    May 21st, 2010 at 01:24am
  • I hope you feel better soon. =)
    Lovely chapter by the way. Alli and Jay are great together. =P
    May 19th, 2010 at 02:41am
  • No. I did not see that one coming. Very good, Valium! I like a good shock.

    Well, I wonder where Zane and Lana's relationship will go from here. Will she eventually forgive him? Or will she just let him flounder in the flames of her hatred? MWAHAHAHAHA.

    Good luck with your surgery! I'll miss you in your absence!

    Loved it!
    May 13th, 2010 at 11:29pm