Farther Away - Comments

Well, no, I didn't see that one coming. Everything was hunky-dory, happy happy time, and then...BLAM! Chaos and drama. I totally did not see that coming.

I mean, I guess Lana should stop being such a short-tempered spider crab and just for once listen to Zane explain before she storms away...but Zane maybe should have told Lana about this little girlfriend of his. He could've told her he wanted to break up with this chick but until then they couldn't do anything because that would be cheating and cheating is bad. But Zane is a boy. And does not think logically.

Loved it! Can't wait for more!

Oh and I have my trust rusty spork in my hand
you better fix this
*glares*

I'm surprised she didn't run to the guys and tell them to kick his ass
that would have been funny

Girlfriend?! Always remember dodgeballs aren't pointy!
Now I wanna kill Zane and his fudging girlfriend.
When the fudge did he have time to get a girlfriend?!

Awww poor Lana. Stupid Zane.updatee soon

Awww poor Lana. Stupid Zane.updatee soon

ahh!! zane's a stupid *mutters* anywho!! yay update :D
can't wait for more, i wanna know what happens :)

W.O.W i love love love it!!! i just found it and i'm amazed, you don't find amazingly good stories that much these days :) i hope her and brian make up, can't wait for more :)

Finally! A dream come true!
Alli and Rose go hard!!
They beat that bitch good. and Zane and Lana are back together. But what if when they go see her dad and he see's the cuts and stuff from the glass and he thinks Zane beat her up and made her go back out with him? Oh noes!!

Well, I loved the part where Rose and Alli kicked whore ass. And I'm so happy they got the confession and Zane and Lana are back together.

BUT! I'm a little concerned about the part where you said we would hate you...That's really concerning me, dear. Because who knows what you'll do!

I guess I can't wait for more....even though that "more" will probably make me wish I'd never read it.

Jay says freak 4 times

Jay said freak 4 times

Aw. But I love Jay. He's mine. Like the seagull in finding nemo mineminemine

4
and I love jay
though I love Zane even more
and I am sorry for calling him a cheater

ya, I counted 4

haha he said freak four times... i think... any who cant wait for more

Loved this update and I think he said freak 4 times.

I have a feeling something bad is going to happen at the beach,more soon?<3

I agree with WhoAmI? I'm really not liking Lana anymore.
She's turning into a hot mess.
And yeah Brian is really right. She changed too much.

Ughhhhhh. Im sorry. But I dont like Lana anymore. Her daddy is right (except the whore part) can you make her go into rehab or some?