Baby, You're So Gone. - Comments

UPDATE PLEASEEEEEEEE

new subscriber! (: i can't believe she just up and left...

Just found this and I wish I found it so much sooner.
I love it!!! <3
I can't believe she just left Nick and the boys, but I'm glad she found her dad.
Keep writing :D

Why'd she leave?

Awe! I'm sad that she left Nick and the boys behind,
But I loved that she had a talk with her mom.
Her mom owed that talk and explanation to her,
And it made me smile to see that she told her she loved her.
I have a feeling someone's going to be making a trip out to
The west coast! (:

Whoa, marriage? Little hasty, there, Ma.

Wait wait wait. Why must she leave? I do not understand this.
Yes, answer the question she asked herself. I must know why she wants to leave.

Oh, damn, you typed that on a Black Berry? I'd probably get extremely mad and smash the thing. I make enough typos on a full blown keyboard, so...

Oh, wow. Uderstanding mom frightens me. She's kind of interesting, but you know, not used to it.

Anyways, good job :)
Can't wait for more!

Well, pft! How could she just leave like that?
I never saw it coming! Hahaa. Actually, I did!
But it's still sad, nonetheless!
I feel so bad for Nicky boyy now!
He's going to wake up and be like, "Good morning, ba-"
And realize she's gone. Okay, maybe I'm exaggerating, but you get my point!
And where in the hell is she even going to go?
Sigh. I can't wait for more, love! (:

^ Epic fail on the BBcodes i know >.<

[FONT=Trebuchet MS]...She left? Nick's gonna be depressed a little. I mean... she friggin' left! She's homeless and was living with A Rocket To The Moon.. Why did she leave?!
I agree with the comment above ^^ it did make me feel sad. But, ya know... they have to meet again... they have too.... right? :(

I'm legitimately depressed.
She can't go anywhere :(
Nick's gonna be so upset when he wakes up.

I'm glad that the guys took her in, being that she was kicked out of her house.
And I'm glad that she's going on tour with them.
Or, was going to go on tour with them.
Her mom is a psycho bitch, seriously. How could she just act like everything's fine?
I have a feeling that this going to cause her to leave earlier than what's
Originally planned. And then I'm going to feel uuber bad for Nick! ):
Lol. I love this story and I love you, boo! (:

Thanks for the comments, guys (:

I'm really obsessed with this story.
I don't understand why you don't have hundreds of comments.
I'm really glad I found this <3

More soon?

love this :3 please update soon :D

Ahhhh, i do love this story (: <3

That was good :)
I liked it.

Although, you could've improved it in one little way.
You shoulda killed the guy. Hands down. Kill mom's shitty boyfriend.

... Actually, I don't remember her mom being all that great to her either, so you could've roughed her up a bit too...

Anyways, I like this one :)
Good job.

LOVED IT! And I'm not just saying that because I love Break Out! Break Out! Because well I do. And I loved how you ended it with the lyrics from the song that fit the situation so well. Best ending around if you ask me.

Oh man adrenaline. haha

Step on it! hehe that was so funny. Halvo was driving the getaway car!?!? tehe

Ha I feel like I'm all over the place. But can't wait until the next update :)

Cute, cute. I do love this :)

Well hello there :)

Aww, this chapter is soo... adorable?
As you may have noticed, I'm deviating away from my usual 'good'.

Strange, isn't it?

Well, anyways, this really was cute. I love how perfect (?) they seem together.

Keep up the good work :)

Hey :)
Really great story.
It's friggen perfect. :D