Baby, You're So Gone. - Comments

How long ago did you update? It seems weird that I'm the first one to comment (I'm rarely ever on Mibba, now.)

Ehh, whatever.

Oh, God, Grand Theft Auto. I completely failed at that game. But then other people would just push me aside and I'd end up watching them play.

Damn, I wish someone would do my laundry for me. Or at least help. At times, it'd be weird, but God, only having to do so much of it...
[/envy]

Anyways, I'll just stop here, before I start telling you my life story, and just leave this at 'Good job :)'

Chapter Ten:

Hahaha, Burrrn. That actually put a smile on my face.

Hahahaha, I like how they're talking about her like she's not even there, when she's in the exact same room.

OMG, food fight! Haha, now I wanna write one of these :)

Ohh, why make the ending so sappy when everything else is all happy?
*facepalms* I'm rhyming again, aren't I?
So, good. And now, write. *points* I command you.

Chapter Nine:

Haha, the shitty sensation of waking up. I know that feeling well.

*gaaassp* You finally made them kiss. I thought they would have done that the night before. Or did they...?
And did they maybe have, umm... (Sorry, I'm awkwardly awkward (Yeah, like awkward squared) so you'll have to excuse me...) Yeah?

Oh, just whatever.
Good :)

Chapter Eight:

Hahaha, YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT HALO IS? Most epic line ever.

Oh, damn. Nick did stutter. Why? What kind of random mind game are you playing?

Okay, correction. "You're fighting for what little is left of mankind; you have to fight a bit fucking harder than that!" That is the most epic line ever.

Well, yeah. I don't know what else to say, so...
GOOD!
Yeah, same word, different emphasis.
:D

Chapter Seven:

I don't like her mom. You should kill her. Like some "freak accident" or maybe one of those boyfriends turns out to be a killer. Sure, it doesn't really fit with the rest of the stoy, but who cares?

This is officially one of my favourite chapters of all time. The rain is fucking amazing. And everyone in my town hates it.
Too bad we get it all the time :D
... Sucks for them :)

Hehe, the rain does bring ut some forms of childishness. Just not with my friends...

Chapter Six:

Haha, I like how she's in denial about everything. Like, not wanting him to know about her home life and all that jazz.
It does makes sense, though. I don't want people to meet my parents. And when they're not acting retarded, they're actually pretty normal :D

I. Want. That. Cottage.
It sounds nice.

Oh, I so knew you were going to make her fall into his arms. I just knew it. *whispers and points to self* You see, I'm psychic.

Oh, but I did not see you doing that. That was just... Just... It was just MEAN.
Although I could definitely see myself doing that at some point during my life. Just not at some Disney cottage with Nick Santino :)

Chapter Five:

Dude, you made him, and then, she was all, and then, and what?
Sorry, I'm a little confused today. I don't even know why. It's almost one in the afternoon, I've done no work, but still, I'm all.. Ugh *rips out hair*

Oh, yeah, this for the story, not me... Oops.

Well, anyways, I like overly cliche stuff. And randomly jumping into peoples cars. Although, I should have known that they wouldn't just you know, leave each other alone. They are the main ( I almost typed 'mean' there O.o) characters.

... So yeah... Good again :D
(Sorry, too lazy to find other words.)

Chapter Four:

Okay, sorry for not continuing sooner. Tests, bossy contest winners (making me read 30+ stories), French homework (and a lot of it...), new Tumblr (Eep!), writing, posting. and just plain old procrastination have kept me away.
But I'm here now.

Hmm, I like this chapter...
I don't know why - like, I just can't quite put my finger on it, but I love it.

I especially love the ending paragraph. It was just... I dunno. I've run out of adjectives. But anyways, good :D

Chapter Three:

I like the descriptions in that one. *applauds like a retard* G'job :D

OMGZZ, (...Umm, yeeaahh.) she stopped at the bus. And she's late. (I keep thinking of that in French. En retard, great way of saying late, huh?)

Haha, nice. Butterflies. I don't understand why that expression is used, I mean, you could use a cooler animal, like a firefly. But anyways, whatever. I'll stop before I start rambling.

Chapter Two:

Hahaha, I love how Paula had her come over.

I can actually imagine this shocked look painted all over her face - even though I don't really know what she looks like. Ohh! I should totally check the characters page. (Slow boat, I told you.)
Although, I would have had her think Who, me? and have her slowly point to herself in uncertainty.
But that's just me, and my overwhelming desire to make everyone else as awkward as I am.

"Maybe staying in this town won't be so bad."
Dun dun duuuuuuhh.

*ahem* Sorry, I just felt like that needed to be said.

My apologies, I would have read this sooner had my family not just moved. But that being said...

Chapter One:

I like it.
The whole horrible parents thing, the little diner as a way to escape. Sometimes I had that. My parents aren't horrible, but I would like to get away for a while.

And gasp! I'm guessing that's the band?
Oh, yes, I am a slow boat. Get used to it. I have at least nine more comments to fill out.

Awe. Her and Nick are so adorable.
I'm glad that they finally got to kiss, even if Justin did interrupt them the first time.
Hahaa.
And the whole food fight - just too adorable! Lol.
Even though I would hate to have the feeling of gooey pancake batter running down my face,
If Nick Santino was there, I honestly wouldn't even care. Hahaa. (:

aww! so cute!
:)))

I think it was funny when
she said "Breakfast" and
Nick just kissed her. lol
:)))

aww! I'm subscribing...
-subscribes-
I love it! :))))

Finally! A good Nick story!
This is so cute <3
Update soon please (:

You're a great Author. (: Keep up the good work with all the great stories.

Her mom's a jackass. I want to punch her lights out. Hahaa.
Awe, Nick is always the knight in shining armor! I love him for it!
(:

I loved that she brought him to a place that's special to her.
But seriously - that was a bitch move, dude.
Poor Nick! I feel so bad for him, lol.
I can't wait for more! (:

i like it xD