A Dirty Mind is a Terrible Thing to Waste - Comments

Wow it is really good :) You are a really good writer :D (Oh and the random pictures are awesome ;D) Can't wait for the next update (>^_^)>

Hello There New Reader Here... This Story Is Amazing I Love It Your a Awesome Writer Keep Up The Kick Ass Job ....

Peace.Love.VampireBlood

Awwww!! that was just adorable!!! if you can call sex adorable. I don't know... I'm sticking with it. :)
Rayne was just too cute. I love that Slayden wanted him to top. So cute. :)

Just found this story && I love it (:
Update soon (:

i dont know, but when i read the part where rayne mentioned the yellow bruises and pain,
i thought of cancer.
u better not do that!

oooh k! thats a lot better!
haha i cant wait to read that! :D
you should update like asap!

Haha.
Rayne topped.
/nonmeaningful

haha well whatever works......
you really wouldnt think rayne was top.....
watch, all of their friends think that slay was top.....
but nope. thats soo not the case....
you cant judge a book by its cover.......?
i guess that works for them.....haha?

i liked it......
but it woulda been better if slay had been on top.....
rayne on top is just awkward and wierd. o.0

I don't think it's to long

I've missed this SO much!
Hah, I do feel like it's dragging.
Yesyesyes, they should have sex...then it won't be dragging along anymore.
;D
<3

I've missed this SO much!
Hah, I do feel like it's dragging.
Yesyesyes, they should have sex...then it won't be dragging along anymore.
;D
<3

No sex? D: loljk.
It seems it strayed from the plot but what do I know? You're the writer.
Thanks for updating because I thought of unsubbing from this.

haha, I was actually just thinking about how they should have sex ;D
I dunno, it kinda depends on where you take it from here
updates are loved<3

that's a mean cliff hanger!!!!
but that's okay, it'll be in the next chapter.
They're just absolutely adorable!!! XD!! they love each other so much and it's just too cute.
I don't think that it's dragging, but it's really all up to you.
Good luck with writing!! I can't wait to see what you come up with. :)

I think the update is good, and I know how you feel writers block toatlly sucks. But I don't think it's dragging out to long I think it's perfectly fine and at a good pace.If you feel less inspired come up with another conflict, that will toatlly get the inspiration flowing. I hoped this helped! But good update and i can't wait for the next! :)

Hmm ive just read the chapter with jake introduced.... love the story by the way but im just saying your making it sound like Jake has more of a scottish/Irish accent lol I'm english myself and trust me we sound pretty much the same as Americans :) But aside from that it is an amazing story...... The pictures of the characters are amazing though...... *squeals*

I love this story so much!!
Can't wait for an update!!

updates pleeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeee im desperate to read more

you should make seth gay
hook him and jake up....
better than sara
i already dont like her