this is such a good start...I'm sure as you keep writing your imagination will get the best of you...lol.....i am def. subscribing!!! check out my storie The Diary of Bree.....its an Avenged Sevenfold fanfiction, and I plan on writing a slash when i get the chance
ohmygosh. i fucking love this story and i know you only have three chapters but they're all SO good.
and i love how your chapters are short-ish. i cannot read a long chapter for the life of me. [but if you DID write a really long chapter, i'd probably still enjoy it :D.]
Omg *dances with joyyy* dedicated to moi? Noooo *giggles* soo happy, such a good chapter it seems he hates Kyle to the point of being nice to others just to get on his nerves? Am I close? Write soon please =D this will turn out to be a good story I'm sure =D