Awwww!! that was just adorable!!! if you can call sex adorable. I don't know... I'm sticking with it. :) Rayne was just too cute. I love that Slayden wanted him to top. So cute. :)
haha well whatever works...... you really wouldnt think rayne was top..... watch, all of their friends think that slay was top..... but nope. thats soo not the case.... you cant judge a book by its cover.......? i guess that works for them.....haha?
No sex? D: loljk. It seems it strayed from the plot but what do I know? You're the writer. Thanks for updating because I thought of unsubbing from this.
that's a mean cliff hanger!!!! but that's okay, it'll be in the next chapter. They're just absolutely adorable!!! XD!! they love each other so much and it's just too cute. I don't think that it's dragging, but it's really all up to you. Good luck with writing!! I can't wait to see what you come up with. :)
I think the update is good, and I know how you feel writers block toatlly sucks. But I don't think it's dragging out to long I think it's perfectly fine and at a good pace.If you feel less inspired come up with another conflict, that will toatlly get the inspiration flowing. I hoped this helped! But good update and i can't wait for the next! :)
Hmm ive just read the chapter with jake introduced.... love the story by the way but im just saying your making it sound like Jake has more of a scottish/Irish accent lol I'm english myself and trust me we sound pretty much the same as Americans :) But aside from that it is an amazing story...... The pictures of the characters are amazing though...... *squeals*