A Dirty Mind is a Terrible Thing to Waste - Comments

  • ForeverEnd

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    Oh snap crackle and pop! I hope he kicks Nick's ass again. Save him save him! Oh lordy lordy lordy this is my adiction and you tease me soooooo much! I can't wait until you update. I guess it's good they are so short it makes people wanna come back for more, like me! I hope you have a good Valentines Day!
    February 15th, 2010 at 01:21am
  • ForeverEnd

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    snap crackle and pop! uww what is gunna happen. cant wait til the next! XP
    February 14th, 2010 at 03:10pm
  • LIVEloveLAUGH!GROW?

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    o my goodness!!!!!!!!!!!

    thts all i have to say :)
    February 14th, 2010 at 06:33am
  • Hezzarther

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    He'll try to rape him again and Slay will bust in and be all 'ME SAVE YOU!' ?
    February 14th, 2010 at 05:27am
  • TalkingToTheMoon

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    Whoa! This story is freaking amazing.
    I love Rayne cause he's nice and sweet.
    But I love Slayden even more because he's so damn bad ass. <3
    Ha ha nick got his ass kicked! :D

    But your story is soooo awesome and I'm going to tell my friends to read. :)
    Keep up the good work!!!!
    February 14th, 2010 at 04:31am
  • GoopyPie223

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    Read all 19 in one sitting! Truly well written and very captivating. Keep up the good work, can't wait for more! ^_^
    February 14th, 2010 at 03:46am
  • Never the Miracle

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    omg he is NOT gonna rape him again is he....i really dont like nick he is a total asswipe...
    still love the story.....
    cant wait for update!!!
    February 14th, 2010 at 03:07am
  • Write Naked

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    Ahh!:D
    February 13th, 2010 at 05:10pm
  • Immortal Lover

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    Yay
    February 13th, 2010 at 05:02pm
  • ForeverEnd

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    aw how cute!
    February 13th, 2010 at 02:39pm
  • LIVEloveLAUGH!GROW?

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    So i just SPED through your story :) (just found it) :)
    I LIKE for real this is great writing. Im a big fan of the switiching point of views thing. :D
    It was great! I'm going to write what I think of the characters :)

    Slayden- A cute wants to change man hoe whos falling for someone for the first time :)
    love that!
    Rayne- Super cute sweet innocent ( I LOVE HIM (: ) im so sad bout the rape thing.
    Poor Rayne (But way to add drama) he so INNOCENT and confused but
    wise I have know clue how to explain waht i mean :O this is the first time
    ive been lost of words...
    Nick- HATE him but love what he puts in to the story :) :(

    So yeah cant wait for that email that says your story has been updated :D
    Peace Out have happy dreams and good times,
    Sincerely,
    Summer <3
    February 13th, 2010 at 07:05am
  • Danishh

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    haha is this like the 5th time ive yelled partyy?
    well,
    PARTTYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
    February 13th, 2010 at 03:43am
  • Hezzarther

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    I would've been all 'Hell yes!' if I was R-babe then.
    February 13th, 2010 at 03:42am
  • Write Naked

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    Ah!
    I feel like...Slayden should beat Nick up at the party ;D
    February 12th, 2010 at 09:41pm
  • ForeverEnd

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    ah poor rayne! sorry if thats spelled
    February 12th, 2010 at 06:07pm
  • KineticEsthetic

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    Party!

    Anyhow... for any other story I'd suggest an almost rape... but an actual one already happened to your main character, so... Maybe Nick shows up? Then Rayne freaks out, and... idk... since it's not at school then maybe Slay and Nick can get into a real fight, with out getting stopped by teachers? Sorry if I'm not much help...
    February 12th, 2010 at 07:55am
  • Danishh

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    PARTYYYYYY
    idk wat should happen :S
    February 12th, 2010 at 05:34am
  • Hezzarther

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    STINKY WEENIE.
    February 12th, 2010 at 02:31am
  • ForeverEnd

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    i am happy i finally got to finish reading the updates! happy happy joy joy! i cant wait til the next then i'll be all snap crackle and pop!
    February 12th, 2010 at 01:00am
  • Hezzarther

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    Hahaha, idiot smashing his hand. (:
    February 11th, 2010 at 11:05pm