Our comments make you cry happy tears of joy? WELL, THIS STORY MAKES ME CRY HAPPY TEARS OF JOY. I always feel bad because everytime I write a comment nowadays, its like, uhhh, I say the same exact things like YOU ROCK.
This chapter was nice. It was, indeed, a filler, but the wonderful talent that you have is that you make even filler chapters seem like they're just as awesome and a part of the story as the dramatic ones. I love that Adam is there to support her. I love that she's finally recognizing that the whole situation is so much bigger than just her and Ben's arguement. There's a little baby that needs to have a father and there's a whole relationship that needs to be resolved and go back to the way it should be. If anything, I hope that their serperation makes them stronger because they realize what its like to be away from each other. :(
This story brings me to speechlessness (I don't think that's a word...). But I would like to say that this story is the kind of story that you'll look back on and just say, "Wow. I wrote that. I FREAKING WROTE THAT." You must be incredibly proud of this story, because I know how proud I am of you. :) I'm so amazed by this. So amazed that Evelyn captures readers' attention like a moth to a lightbulb, because like I always say, she IS us. Well, I know she's YOU, but I feel like all of us that religiously read this story and will do anything to find a way to the internet to read each update and comment must feel like they are a part of something so epic. Like the people at the 1980 Miracle game, like the people who have ever witnessed or been a part of something so great - not kidding - that's how I feel. I feel like one day, when its all said and done, I'll always remember Ben and Evelyn and their story and you for writing it for us. Wow. I'm rambling. The Olympics always make me feel all hypothetical and serious and stupid.
Anyway, you rock. xD PLEASE POST THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON.
i love your story ! can't wait for the update. im assuming ben will be a little upset and a bit shocked that she's home but his anger shouldn't last long because he got his wife back and of course his unborn baby :)! which should make him very happy :D
if another girl is added into this equation .. ill flip !!
Yes, she's going homeeee! I hope Ben isn't too much of a douche. I mean he has a right to be upset and a little hostile, but he's going to be a daddy! Can't wait for more! <3
FINALLY she gets some sense in her. I'm thinking Ben will react by being really pissed or just completely breaking down...or somewhere in the middle...lol either way, I can't wait to see! I need some Ben! Update soon! :)
Amzing update! I hope you get better soon! Being sick and working is not fun at all. I'm glad Evelyn is comming to terms with that ome is where Ben is. She just needs to get there next. :)
Secondly, good update, as always. I'm happy to see she's going back to Chicago and Ben. She made the right desicion not signing up for the fall semester. I really hope Bem doens't freak when he sees her back and pregnant. I have a feeling he won't but you never know.
Yay she's going back! I wonder how Ben's going to react. I'm trying to figure out what Michael's role in all this....I wonder if he's going to cause something between Ben and Evelyn. More soon please! I hope you get better =]
I'm glad she's going back, it'd be great to keep the happy vibe going and you know make Ben ecstatic to be having a baby or...it could go down the whole bad path of "maybe it's Micheal's". I vote the first one, happy vibe is good. Bad that she hasn't told him yet when she's already this far along though.
YAY! I'm so happy that she's going back to Ben! Can't wait to see how Ben reacts!!! I hope you feel better soon and I can't wait for the next chapter! <3
This chapter was nice. It was, indeed, a filler, but the wonderful talent that you have is that you make even filler chapters seem like they're just as awesome and a part of the story as the dramatic ones. I love that Adam is there to support her. I love that she's finally recognizing that the whole situation is so much bigger than just her and Ben's arguement. There's a little baby that needs to have a father and there's a whole relationship that needs to be resolved and go back to the way it should be. If anything, I hope that their serperation makes them stronger because they realize what its like to be away from each other. :(
This story brings me to speechlessness (I don't think that's a word...). But I would like to say that this story is the kind of story that you'll look back on and just say, "Wow. I wrote that. I FREAKING WROTE THAT." You must be incredibly proud of this story, because I know how proud I am of you. :) I'm so amazed by this. So amazed that Evelyn captures readers' attention like a moth to a lightbulb, because like I always say, she IS us. Well, I know she's YOU, but I feel like all of us that religiously read this story and will do anything to find a way to the internet to read each update and comment must feel like they are a part of something so epic. Like the people at the 1980 Miracle game, like the people who have ever witnessed or been a part of something so great - not kidding - that's how I feel. I feel like one day, when its all said and done, I'll always remember Ben and Evelyn and their story and you for writing it for us. Wow. I'm rambling. The Olympics always make me feel all hypothetical and serious and stupid.
Anyway, you rock. xD PLEASE POST THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON.