November 26th, 2019 at 10:00pm
Okay, it has deadass taken me weeks to read this because I kept taking breaks but the chapters are pretty bite-sized for the most part which helps loads with my attention span lmfao. Anyway I'm on chapter 35 now so getting close to the finish! It's been a really sweet story, very... relaxed, I guess? Like some low-key 'drama' but nothing overly painful or stressful so it's quite a nice easy read, and I've enjoyed that a lot. I really want to give Zack a hug tbh. I love the family dynamic of him, his adoptive dads, his adoptive brother... it's great. I'm also loving that he's in touch with his mother again. But there's still like ten chapters to go so I imagine I might suffer some heartache yet lol.
OH LITERALLY AS I TYPED THAT I WENT BACK TO READ CHAPTER 35 AND JARED IS HERE LMAOOOOO so the heartache begins. I am fear.
I'm so proud of Zack for standing up to him though!!! I'll comment again once I finish, I'm totally fearing that that's not the last of Jared lmao.
ONE THING I WAS CONFUSED ABOUT THOUGH. You mentioned in like two or three chapters that something weird was going on with Joel (I think it was Joel)... like he wasn't at school or whatever. I don't think you ever said in the story what it was? Or maybe I missed that yikes. I guess it's not super important since Joel was basically a background character but still.
So yeah! I enjoyed it. Always did have a soft spot for Zalex.