Poor Jess... Id Imagine its very hard for the woman who have husbands in that line of work ...to know that everytime they say goodbye it might be that last :( very good story I already feel for the characters ....
Well damn. This is already amazing. It's so sad, but I can seriously feel both their pain. Amazing job! I'm sure you'll win something with this. :) I love it! More soon please!
PS - Maybe I'm the only one, but the writing on your layout is sorta hard to read. >.< Sorry! I looks awesome, it's just the writing.