Life in the Shadows - Comments

I would totally be pissed if my parents did that. >:(

...die. i freaking though johas was dead??!?!?!

*whines desperately* dont let her out!! she'll die! this is madness i tell you, MADNESSSSSS!

Delos is hot. Period. He killed his sister though...? Thats horrible... Poor them):

you changed the story title? anyways, i hope they tell her why she cant leave the grounds before she runs away..

Happy b-day. Sorry its kinda late. XP But anyways great chapter! Cn't wait intill the next update! XD

HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR!! and wow. delos brings new meaning to looks that kill...but hes hot, so it okay =D

I'm really excited about a sequel to Nature's Law... but I thought you might want to know, the purple writing is insanely hard to read. Maybe if you made it just a little lighter, it would be better?

OMG amazing!!!!!!!!!!

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Amazingness! XDDD

I don't like it. I love it. This will be veryveryvery interesting:D

I liked it <3 I don't see how you get the imagination to wright these stories. I think you should definitely continue this one =)

it's a good start. Although i don't like the picture you chose. i think you need a more powerful one like in nature's law. but other than that i like it.....oh and you should explain what she looks like. Like lia? scott? Black hair? red hair?

damn you, i want more! i hope she doesnt run away and die...