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  • adora68

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    I really loved this chapter and I enjoy your writing. I hope you continue the story because I am crazy about the characters, but if you're stuck I understand. A prequel could be good because we could find out about "the old Frank."

    Here's a thought... you could also continue with the story as Frank "finds himself" again (or whatever) and use your ideas for a prequel as flashbacks. Then when you get stuck moving forward, you could jump back for a while. Just a random idea. :)
    January 8th, 2008 at 11:37am
  • Psyche Adrenaline

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    I just realized I read this story, forgot about it, then found it again after going to your profile to leave the comment about it being too cold for penguins in Ohio :XD

    I love this story, you're a wondeful writer. Update whenever you can, I'll gladly wait.

    xoxo
    Psyche
    December 11th, 2007 at 12:22pm
  • CharredRemains

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    YAY! THERE HAPPY AGAIN!
    November 15th, 2007 at 04:12am
  • ugly face;

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    aww they're happy again =P
    November 14th, 2007 at 06:31am
  • Kat_madison

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    aww...i'm glad they're okay again In Love
    November 13th, 2007 at 06:47pm
  • littleMISSayesha

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    [ new readerrrr ]
    i love this story.
    its so diffrent && sweet.

    it IS lacking one thing though.

    .. BOY SEXXXXX
    you know you want too

    x
    November 13th, 2007 at 02:10pm
  • CyanideRevengex

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    Haha..Donna is so cool!

    Gerard makes me laugh at some points though!
    haha

    Keep on updating!
    November 13th, 2007 at 12:03pm
  • adora68

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    I'm loving this too much. *sigh*

    Donna's the coolest mom ever.
    November 13th, 2007 at 11:45am
  • ugly face;

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    i think...that if frankie wants to, he'll change bak.
    he should atleast.
    mikey just needs to patient.
    November 13th, 2007 at 01:10am
  • Psyche Adrenaline

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    GO MIKEY!
    You bring Frank back!
    I'm pretty happy about this update. Great job
    November 13th, 2007 at 12:08am
  • Kat_madison

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    aww....
    November 12th, 2007 at 06:43pm
  • CyanideRevengex

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    yay.
    A Frikey!!

    Love this story!!
    Keep it going!
    November 12th, 2007 at 03:11pm
  • adora68

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    It's hardly a "chance meeting" when Gee took them to a park in the neighborhood where he knew Frankie was living.

    Be patient, Mikes, Frankie will bounce back. It just takes time.

    I really like this story. It's sweet (and I mean that in the best possible sense of the word :))
    November 12th, 2007 at 02:53pm
  • CharredRemains

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    Dont leave us on the edge like this!!! *fake cries*
    November 12th, 2007 at 02:11pm
  • CharredRemains

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    wow I love it!!! Plz write more soon!!! P.S Im failing most of my courses 2, ur not alone.
    November 12th, 2007 at 12:22pm
  • Psyche Adrenaline

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    -New reader-

    This is great!

    I love how long the chapters are, and don't worry, we all understand end of terms and writer's block. It sucks.
    I'm surprised you don't have more comments! This is such an awesome story.

    I'll subscribe and look out for an update.
    xoPsyche
    November 12th, 2007 at 11:59am
  • ugly face;

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    i'll wait as long as it takes.
    November 12th, 2007 at 11:31am
  • ugly face;

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    cool beans yo.
    i'm surprised that mikey's family doesn't hate frankie...<.<
    November 6th, 2007 at 10:31am
  • VaNyA

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    cute cute cute cute and cute!!! i LOVE it!!!! poor gee, you still have your brother! cheer up!
    November 3rd, 2007 at 11:40pm
  • VaNyA

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    loved the update! more soon please!
    November 2nd, 2007 at 03:23am