Sold On the Black Market? - Comments

:) Yes. First I'd like to say, "I would love for a sequel." Then I would like to say, "I love the chapter title." It rings true in my head.

I was going to put my plan in action today.
When I read this my face was like ^^ and I was like *squeals like a pig*. Well, that's what I was told...

“Um…he was bigger than you,” he said. “Well, thicker anyway.”
Oh dear... Now does he really have to say that? :O Lol.

“My blood became his lube,” he muttered, looking down at his fingers, which were in his lap. My eyes widened at his words, and I squeezed his knee encouragingly, waiting for more, but not really wanting to hear it.
It's like he was telling a story. When I read that I was thinking, "It's like he's reliving it." I don't know why but I really like that. :) Not that fact that he got raped, but the fact that he was telling it like a story. Even though that was one sentence, it was like a whole story. You know what I mean? I think I'm confusing myself. x.x

I got closer to him, taking my hands in mine, kissing the backs of them. “We have to buy puppy food.”

His eyes widened, just like I wished they would, and his mouth dropped into a smile as he extended his arms to me again, pulling me into a hug. “Are you serious?”

“As serious as herpes,” I grinned, hugging him back.

“A puppy?” he squealed.

I shook my head, and his face fell. “No, not a puppy. Puppies. ”

He gasped. “ Two?”
Okay, so you might laugh at this. When I first read that I thought, "They're going to have babies? This is an m-preg story? Oh my gosh! I have to pee!" But then I read: “I have a friend whose German Shepherd had a few puppies, and all are taken but two, and they were born two days ago. They’re really tiny, and they’re still nursing and their mom died. But I know you’ve always wanted a puppy, so I thought this might be a good start to make it up to you.”

He shook his head. “You don’t have to make it up to me, baby. None of it was your fault.”

“Again, I still feel responsible, and the deal is done.”

He rolled his eyes, “Whatever.”

“Are you ready to go get them?” And I started laughing. And I still am. More like giggling though. I thought that was some code word for human puppies. xD

I want a sequel! I squeal for the sequel! :)

I will try to help you get 10 stars. :) I don't know how but I will.

I want that sequel!!!!! Amazing story!

pretty please right a sequel!!! I LOVE this story and don't think I could live with out it....plus all my favorite stories are either over or about to end so I don't want this one to!!!!

Aww poor Matthew.
What Addison said to him was so sweet.
Amazing chapter, I loved it!
Update soon! <333

Great story! Really <3 it. Can't wait for more.

yay!! I loved the new chapters!! Okaies, first off, ima kill ronald for doing that to him. ima kill him. i dont care how ima do it, but i will
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and yay!!!! it had a happy ending just like you saud!!
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if it didnt i wouldve been sad
T^T
they are such an adorable couple!!
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update soon!!!
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please?
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-Gives love-

Keep updating! ~Riley

AGH! MY UPDATES! x.x I'm sorry I didn't comment for so long! I honestly wasn't getting updates. :( So I checked up and saw that it went on! :( KILL RONALD! Sorry, just had to say that. I don't like that man and I freaking hate what he did. He's a bastard, a kriffing bastard.

Well done my love. (:
I really liked this chapter.
Pease update soon. I wanna know what happens next! (:

Really love the new layout!
Cant wait for the next chapters :)

woo!!
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i loved the new chaapter!!!
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i really like the new banner and background too!
lawlz
you must update soon!!!
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please?
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I love the new layout! I just wish that you gave me the link for the photo from the other one... x.x

this story is adorable! I love it! super cute!

This is my fav story on! Please here keep updating :)
Its so cute!

:O I lub this story!!!!!! yay gayness -claps- o.o
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!
......plz? :]

Wow i just read this whole story and I absolutely love it!! Addison and matthew are sooooo adorable together. I hate jared and im so happy they got away. Im glad thing are going smoothly but im sure that means something bad is about to happen:( i hope Jared or anyone doesnt find them! And Im happy both addison and Matthew are getting jobs. But shame shame for drinking whilst under 21 lol! This story is amazing and I wish i found it sooner! Definitely cant wait for more!

I've got two words for you. DAMN SEXY. That is all. ~Riley

ahhhhhhhhhhh!!
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how cuute!!
their engaged!!
i cant believe that they forgot christmas though.
how forgets christmas?!
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i loved the new chapters!!
they were all so sweet!!
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you must update soon!!
lawlz
please?
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I found this on accident. I ish glad I did. ^_^
Update?

Chapter 16: “We’re still naked,” he realized, touching my abs, his thighs rubbing against mine.

“Let’s stay that way. It’s our house, right?”. That was so delicious. I'm sweating just picturing that in my mind

His breathing hitched when I touched his member, pointing out the greatness of THAT. Dear God, please forgive my sins for that line made me scream out with happiness. You know how to make me scream for the love of yaoi/slash.

Chapter 17: When I read the first paragraph I flipped out.

A/N: I actually adore Google, but Matthew’s a little agitated. Don’t hate. :) Lol! That's great!

When they started to work "magic" I was thinking, "What if Addison puked in Matthew's mouth?" Rofl. Epic!

Chapter 18: “Umm… ménage á trois…” Paul muttered. Dunno what that means but it sounds good. Lol.

Oh my gosh! Engaged! I wanna sing the song that...uh...little girls sing at weddings... Lol. I dunno what it's called. ^^ Hot sex in the parking lot. x) Yummy!