You Leave Me Breathless - Comments

  • solita

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    But now to the sequel!
    :D
    August 20th, 2010 at 12:34pm
  • goodbyeeeee

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    omg. :O
    Subscribing to the triquel now!!!
    IM SO SORRY MIKEY ND TRIN ND PEY AND FRANK!
    July 9th, 2010 at 04:55am
  • Togepenis

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    Aww!! I loved the ending!
    July 8th, 2010 at 10:31pm
  • BeggingForChanges

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    You know, if there wasn't a third part, I'd probably cry now. Or at least, tear up a bit.
    July 8th, 2010 at 08:01pm
  • running from lions

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    (:
    for the mention, the story in general, and the bitter, bittersweet ending
    can't want for the next ^^
    July 8th, 2010 at 06:03pm
  • mentirosa.

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    Aww.
    I really hope they find their mom.
    Cause if they don't, people's hearts are broken for nothing.

    Now I'm going to go subscribe to the next one :]
    July 8th, 2010 at 05:02pm
  • goodbyeeeee

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    Wait a freaking second. :O
    How did Alex and Zach find their mommy?
    HOW!!
    Poor Poor Mikey, I want to hug him right now.
    Can he pleeeeeeeeeeease be in the triquel? :O PLEASE!?!
    lol.
    Nice chapter, but Trin & Mikey, ahh, :(
    Its weird, but I probably wouldn't be fussing over Peyton and Frank. :P
    July 6th, 2010 at 09:36pm
  • sharkbites

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    Alex is officially a dick. And Zach is too. Gah, I hate them. Especially because that information is like life-changing for the girls. Grrrrr. Poor Mikey and Frank. :( I hope they find their mom otherwise they lost everything for nothing.
    July 3rd, 2010 at 10:48pm
  • BeggingForChanges

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    So All Time Low was in the first one, MCR was in this one, and I wonder if there will be a band in the next one?

    Anyway, amazing chapter!!
    July 3rd, 2010 at 09:00pm
  • Togepenis

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    Poor Mikey :(
    July 3rd, 2010 at 08:36pm
  • mentirosa.

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    I guess this is a good thing. Atleast Mikey isn't as sad anymore.

    I can't wait to see what happens in the sequel though xD
    July 3rd, 2010 at 07:11pm
  • blaqrican13

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    when are you going to continue
    July 2nd, 2010 at 05:33pm
  • goodbyeeeee

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    Oh my God!! I was like, tearing up when Trin broke up with Mikey!
    I feel so bad!
    I hope they get back together. :(
    Poor Trin. Poor Mikey.
    Fuck Zack, he needs to die. Along with Alex.. Ahh I wannna kill those two right now!
    But their mommy!! OMG! That's amazing. Even though she had to have -ahem- sex with Zack, I'm glad she found it.
    And I hate to say it, BUT {if she didn't have to break up with Mikey} I would be kind of glad that happened. BUT IT'S NOT!!
    I hope Mikey and Trin get back together.
    And I hope, hope, HOPE Zack and Gaskarth Are NOT in the triquel?
    :D
    June 30th, 2010 at 01:24am
  • Judgments.Reject

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    You need to update! I started crying when she broke up with Mikey!!
    June 29th, 2010 at 11:54pm
  • BeggingForChanges

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    I knew it! As soon as Alex said he had information, I knew it had to do with their mother.

    Now, I say you update soon.
    June 29th, 2010 at 08:17pm
  • hayleyrd7-80

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    OMFG can you PLEASEEE write onr about them and bring me the horizon after this one

    i would be so fucking stoked:)

    your an amazing writer
    love your stories
    June 29th, 2010 at 05:02pm
  • Dodger

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    As much as it was wrong,it's still nice to see the Zack/Trinity pairing again :)
    x
    June 29th, 2010 at 01:20pm
  • Judgments.Reject

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    This is awesome. I literally didn't move for 4 hours while reading You Look Pretty Low and this story is awesome also!!!!
    Keep going!
    June 29th, 2010 at 06:10am
  • Togepenis

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    Woahh!! This chapter had so much going on.
    As always, it was amazing :D
    June 29th, 2010 at 05:58am
  • Crazysabby

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    NOOOO TIRN!! gah :(

    btw one of ur bolds messed up :\

    *sigh* i 'mj glad she's gotten to a point hwere she wont cheat.. but.. NOO MIKEY!!! but zacks hot too.. OH I'M TORN NOW!!!! and she's turned into such a good person.. SHE EVEN HAS REMORSE!! sigh!!! i wonder what mikley's thinking atm.. and who she'll pick O.o

    if it was that easy for alex to do it, why didnt'the girls fidn thier mother before O.o
    June 29th, 2010 at 05:44am