You Leave Me Breathless - Comments

as soon as I saw "pop-punk bitches," I knew
you're cruel, although I abuse the cliffhanger, too (;

Lmao
All through that chapter I was like
"It's happening! It's happening!"
I think I might of yelled when it happened xDD
Gahhh!!! I can't wait for the next chapter.

J-DOG!!!!!!
:D:D:D XD XD
I'm soo happy right now:P
x

Shit. I knew this was coming:P If a) Peyton goes back to Alex I will kill her, and b) Trinity goes back to Zack I will kill her. Now can I please go kill Alex & Zack?

Ohh mi gosh!
Ahh finally they show up I the story ;D
let the drama begin !

Screw Trinity's moodswings...

Thank God she's not pregnant. That wouldn't be a good thing.

And the next chapter is when ATL comes back? Or the one after that?

Amazing update either way.

Awww, poor Mikey
:[

But yay! She's not pregnant.
That's a relief

Rofl, she punched Frank as soon as she saw him
xD

So weird,I was just thinking as I clicked onto the story that there needed to be a pregnancy scare due to the sisters crazy casual sex...and it happened...freaky :)
And dude!I'm so excited for chapter 25,I've missed my Jack even though I know he won't be in it for long :(
x

Whoa.

Pregnant?

See, this is what happens when they don't double check. Tsk, tsk.

Anyway, I demand an update soon. Because I can. ;;)

OMFG! HER OUTFIT WAS PURPLE!<333 sorry. I love that color...:] ANYWAYS
Peyton seems to be much happier now that she's with Frank and if she IS pregnant, I hope it just increases both of their love and commitment to eachother.
I think Trinity & Mikey are doing very well, and I'm glad they got together.
Donna is just too kickass for words.

Nice chapter, that was. Update soon!

Finally! They're together again!
Update soon please!

and if Frank breaks PEYTON'S heart, I will kill him too. Along with everyone else. Same goes for Peyton & Mikey.

*gasp* scandal! and love :D
and will we see Zack again? I wonder...

About time:] But I damn well hope that she will always stay with Mikey and doesn't break his heart. Or else she'll have the whole of the MCR bunch + Girlfriends + fans after her. Me as well. Maybe even Peyton.

So you kinda need to update every day until All Time Low comes in. But, you shouldn't. Because then the story would be way to close to over.

Amzing update, as always.

you should bring zack and alex back ..somewhere along this chapter to increase the drama

Omg.
You fucking scared me. D:
I dropped my apple on the floor.
Thanks a lot.
Jk.

Awwwwwwww. I <3 Trin & Mikey! :D

Or now.