So excited for the update! I am on edge waiting for the third task to begin since of all the suspense you have created. Hope to see the next update soon. :)
I love the story please update you have devoted fans on here that are actually waiting around for you to update I find everything about this story amazing and i have read a lot of stories please update
Okay, so completely new to the story and I'm hooked. The plot, the characters, simply everything about it so far, is purely awesome with some more awesome on top. =D I'm certainly subscribing to this, I hornestly couldn't pass it up no matter what x)
So this whole third task thing is sounding like a whole lot of trouble so far, and yet I can't wait to read more about it ^.^
Awesome story so far and I can't wait to read even more of it ^.^
Thank you for updating you rock! I'm really excited to see what happens to Rose and Scorpius in the third task so just know you have fans in anticipation. :)
oh my gosh haha I read this for 4 straight hours last night and finished it as soon as I got up. It is one of the best fan-fictions I ahve ever read I can't wait to see how it ends You go okay? :) I hope I can get to be as good a writer as you :)
man i caught the tail end of your story. i just joined and been reading it every free chance i got ^o^ i didnt think you were still posting chapters... until i got to the last one lol. it took me a few days to read it all. impressive length! i love the foreshadowing you've done for rose's... death? unfortuate accident? who knows! its not going to be a tea party though, thats for sure. it kills me that rose is hiding her visions from scorpius. you really know how to keep me on the edge of my seat. im so excited for the next chapters. i like your level of romance. its very decent and realistic.thank god scorpius isnt like some of the dracos in stories that ive read.apparently everyone sees draco as a "sex god" O.e. im not saying i didnt enjoy the part where rose and scorpius hooked up. i was grinning like a fool, and normally i dont while reading. thats how good your suspense was. i know you wont disappoint when it comes to the final! i (naturally) hope this story has a sequel lol. even if it doesnt it would still be a satisfying read :) keep up the good work!
This is the first next generation fanfic I've read that isn't a one-shot and I absolutely love it! I like the new additions to the magic world and how it mentions and includes all of the relatives, not just the main characters. It really is an awesome story, so please update :)
This is great! Before this, I've never read a Harry Potter fanfic of the next generation. You're a great writer, obviously. The only critiques I can think of are that in the first few chapters there are a lot of exclamation points, and it kind of gave me a headache when I was reading it because of how I would read it in my head! But I think you got better as the story progressed. Also, there were a lot of showers. It was kind of random and didn't usually add to the plot. There was a lot of sleeping too. A lot of the times you can just skip that stuff. Everything else was great though! I especially liked her dreams about Spunky and the whole thing about Dream Imps and everything. Very creative. (: