....This has GOT to be the most amazing Harry Potter fan-fiction I've read yet, and I've read ALOT. I hope you update as soon as you can! Can't wait for the third task and to see the whole clan. Also are you going to make the dinner scene? It'd be interesting but i'm not counting on it :D So yeah....update soon.
This is actually the first time I have read a fanfic with the kids in it. Usually I just stick to the characters that were the main part of the books. I am surprised to say that I think this may be the best Harry Potter fanfiction I have EVER read. No lie. I wasn't sure if I would get into it like I did the rest I have read because of it being about Scorpius and Rose, but this story is amazing. Your writing style is fabulous! There is not a single part of this story so far that has left me dissappointed. I can not wait to read what else your mind has to offer to us (: Update soon! <3 Lindsay
I LOVE this story. I wasn't too much into rose/scorpius fanfiction, but I thought I'd give it a try, and now I know I like it! Sorry for being a bit of a silent reader, I wanted to catch up in the chapters before I commented. Your writing is excellent, reminds me very much of a real professional author. Good job! As for what u think are fillers, I think they're perfect. I don't usually like it when the romance is rushed, so this makes me very happy and keeps me engaged, thank you! :)
I LOVE YOUR STORY :DDD IM NOT SURE HOW TO RATE IT BUT IF I KNEW HOW YOU WOULD GET TOM STARS :DDDDDDD (P.S I DONT YOU USUALLY RIGHT LIKE THIS BUT I'M HYPER DUE TO YOUR AWESOME STORY) (EVEN IF I HAVENT GOTTEN TO THE LOVE PART AND AM ONLY ON CHAPTER 37) :) <3
It doesn't seem like a filler at all. Chapters like these are often more important than the ones with the action scenes. Astoria is definitely someting else. I liked that Hermione and Narcissa could talk to each other. It actually reminded me that Scorpious is a pure blood. I'd completely forgotten. It's also nice to see that Draco grew up. As well as Ron. It'll be entertaining to read the chapter with Lucious and the Weasleys.
Oh and you wasn't sure who Percy married but aparently he wed someone called Audery. I'll be damned if I can remeber her from the books but there you have it :) just so you know lol
Hiiiiiii! I've started reading from the start again because i got to chaper 50-something and then forgot to check for updates and ended up getting totally lost and forgeting what had happened D: im such a silly sausage! *Facepalm*
I love your story it's really addicting. I just wanted to let you know, i don't know if anyone else realized that in Chapter 57 the part where Scorp and Rose are fighting the dragon-lion in the second task. The one paragraph where Rose uses the spell Protego to try and stop the tails, you kind of went in and out of I and She when talking about Rose. But other than that its really amazing and the descriptions of the different creatures are really good
I can't believe that they haven't told their parents. I mean I get that Draco and Ron want to hex each other into the next century, but how do you not tell your parents that you're in love with your best friend?!? Anywho, I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
...That. Was. The. Most. Sheer. Awesome. Harry. Potter. Fanfic. I. Have. Ever. Read. In. The. History. Of. Time. EVER!
I'm sure Mr. Malfoy, Potter, Weasley, and all the Mrs. and siblings would ADORE this story. It's so..."GIVE ME FREAKIN MORE I WONT EAT OR SLEEP UNTIL I HAVE READ THE VERY LAST SENTENCE." and it's so unexpected: Rose and Scorpius! I love it! Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.