XD This is so good! it's amazing. Seriously. I cannot describe it in a way that will make me sound like a twilight saga fan, saying how "wonderful" it is (No offense people who love twilight.), or if I sound like a grammar critic pleased with the story. ;] All I can say is, Amazing with a capital A. I really hope you update sooner, than later.
He's fucking crazy! I actually don't think Zacky's chubby or anything like that, but I guess it depends on what picture you're looking at... Update soon! I really like it so far :)