Don't Let 'Em Say You Ain't Beautiful - Comments, page 5

The Nightmare B4 Me (100)

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I like this story, but I think you are over doing it with the grammar or lack there of.

March 3rd, 2010 at 05:48am

Frozen.Undies (100)

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lol i love this story! hope you update soon.

March 2nd, 2010 at 12:09am

I'm.Not.Insane. (100)

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Great Update
=]

March 1st, 2010 at 11:28pm

AlternativeAdele (100)

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Oh shit, Ja can be such a dick but he still was awesome in Fast and Furious haha. Poor Marshall and Evangeline, update soon????? <3

March 1st, 2010 at 07:25am

honeybee-red (155)

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those plans sound dangerous.
oh snap.
damn, this is absolutely amazing!
i love it! :D

March 1st, 2010 at 05:27am

Saigetsu (100)

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Oo yay an update! I seriously live on your updates. I really wanna beat that Ja's ass. But I'm sure Slim Shady will come up with an amazing comeback right?

March 1st, 2010 at 03:22am

ghost busters. (100)

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I don't like Eminem very much, to be honest, but this is really good!

Update soon. :)

March 1st, 2010 at 02:45am

Saigetsu (100)

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Yay I love this story! It's so original especially since there aren't that many eminem stories here. I'm fact, this is the only one I can find that I like. Evangeline and Marshall are so cute together! Update soon 'cause they make happy like I'm sure comments do for you.

February 28th, 2010 at 09:09pm

aashleee (100)

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love it. update sooon please!!

February 27th, 2010 at 09:57pm

Hell_raiser (100)

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Nice story, not too many Eminem stories around.

If you ever need lyrics for a diss track, just hit me up. I'll be more than happy to write you up a song since I do rap.

February 26th, 2010 at 02:07pm

AlternativeAdele (100)

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YAY, love the two updates :)
Cant wait for more, Marshall is sooo sweet in this <3!!
Update soon??

February 25th, 2010 at 06:03am

k0013 (100)

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awww :]]

February 22nd, 2010 at 04:06am

valary_roxs_07 (100)

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omg i cant believe he asked her to marry him i hope to god she says yes but we all know she is cause shes in love with him. Update soon like really really soon. and this story has to be atleast 30 or more chapters you have to contiune to write more eminem or come up with another story with about him.

February 18th, 2010 at 05:22am